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Title: Chapter 3	04 Nov 2024 5:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

Fantastic! I love it! I'm glad that Snape actually sems to of listened. This bodes well.

Title: Chapter 5	04 Nov 2024 5:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

I loved the epilogue. What a beautiful reunion of Harry with Sirius and Severus. I bet the parent Malfoys are not happy at Harry changing the timeline since Draco's gone now. Do they remember?

Some corrections:

Harry returned the hug with surprising ease. He noted that an inch or two on Severus.

that he had an inch

Severus actually grinned. "Ah, but as I died at thirty-eight, I expect to look way for some time.

look that way

"Well." Severus cleared his throat. "Harry, I also wish to apologize for how attempted to teach you

for how I

Thanks agan for writing and sharing this story! It had such a happy ending. A pleasure to read.

Title: Chapter 4	04 Nov 2024 4:55 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

Fantastic! I love it! What a wonderful way to change the timeline. I'm so glad that we got to see the new memories.

Some corrections:

Parma Patil

Padma

Harry and Lily ended up with eight kids.

Harry and Ginny

Thanks so much for writing and sharing this! I really enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 5	15 Oct 2024 4:54 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed)	[Report This]

Love it!

Title: Chapter 5	14 Oct 2024 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed)	[Report This]

Love it!

Title: Chapter 4	12 Oct 2024 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed)	[Report This]

Love it!

Title: Chapter 3	26 Aug 2024 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed)	[Report This]

Oooo, what new memories will he have?

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! :) Thanks for you reading and your kind feedback!

Title: Chapter 2	26 Aug 2024 1:57 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed)	[Report This]

Oooo.... more please!

Title: Chapter 3	25 Aug 2024 8:52 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed)	[Report This]

Can't wait for the new memories. Thanks for the great chapter.

Title: Chapter 2	22 Aug 2024 8:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

YAY! An update! I love your version of Harry He's mature, in control, and leading the conversation. It is so nice to see the older auror version of Harry standing on equal ground with Snape - higher ground actually. What a delightful switch. I really like your Snape too. Good writing, fantastic set up and descriptions. The dialouge is good, everyone is in character. It is a fresh idea and exciting premise. I love it so far!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback, and your thoughtful comments! Yes, we only get one chapter in canon of Harry after he survived the war, but I imagine that he's matured a lot in the two decades that followed. Not that he was immature beforehand, of course, but now, he's a husband and a father. Professionally, he's dealt with criminals and knows how their minds work. He's had the time to look back on his time at school with a new perspective, and it's possible that he's been able to use a pensieve to analyze some of his memories. As a result, he's very well prepared to encounter his former teacher, and what to say to make him take Harry seriously. I hope you continue to enjoy this work! :)

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