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Reviews For The Learning Curve
Oh dear, I wish Harry had seen the paper Umbridge had with his name on it, this means trouble
Just picturing the scene, and you painted it very well, made me laugh, thank you
A nice comfortable chapter with the interactions being more like the previous installmwnt at the village. Nice to see them comfortable together, stufying
I like the description of Harry finding a path to categorise his two Snapes. It sets up the difficulties Harry has with the two over the next chapters
I really like this chapter- the interface between professor snape and severus is a really interesting dynamic- and particularly when Dumbledore is there too.
I wonder why Dawlish was like that at the start of the chapter- if he was just witing to get enough evidence against Harry before playing his cards or if there is something else at play like an imperius or other outside control and he didn’t have instructions for that. Really enjoyed the chapter, I was so happy when I saw there was an update!
I'm reall6 enjoing this story, and loved the previous part as well. I’ve just got my login working again so I’m back to leave reviews. I enjoyed Snape's not a date in this chapter, and it was interesting to put in that she thought she was giving information to the order, but was feeding it to the wrong side- it really emphasises that there are three sides to the whole conflict
I Love this :)
Great chapter, I would love to see Severus in an Easter egg hunt if only in the mind maze.
Excellent - as always! (Though I could have done without the cliffhanger. XD) |
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