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Reviews For A Lit Roof in a Dark World
Thanks for the new chapter! I really liked Harry's and Snape's banter, and the light and dark magic explanation was kind of cool.
Well written and excited to see where this goes!
Thank you, I love Leslie and Meghan but they will have to move on of course
Forgot the frogs...
Not a fan of zombie stories, but your's is great! Thank you for updating.
Loved this chapter and story. Harry certainly is growing up and maturing quickly.Cool that he decided to try out Snape's spell.
What is Snape sick with? Does it have anything to do with the ritual?
I hope Luna is okay. Nice that Harry was able to use the DA coins to check in with his friends.
I was thinking that if Harry knew the spell for a stretcher he could put Snape on it and have it follow his if he walked or flew.
They need to eat more than croissants and biscuits. No protein would make them fatigued as well... maybe they can raid a home for some canned beans or meat?
Some corrections I noticed:
Harry sent out a wise-spread Depulso
wide-spread
He turned his back on the thunderous but slightly confused Snape gave at this
confused look
Uh oh. They were really lucky no zombies found them. But what's wrong with Snape? Does it have anything to do with the ritual Voldemort did? Great chapter. I loved the development and pace, and the story line and descriptions are great as well.
Woah this is awesome! Very unique premise! I love it! Snape definitely should take Harry to the ritual site. Harry has his broom. They just need another broom and then they could fly. Or do zombies interfere with broomsticks? I love how Snape refuses to call the creatures Zombies. Surely St Mungoes is working on a cure. Right? The Muggles reaction will be to just bomb and destroy everything. All the major cities once infected.
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