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Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 12:55 am
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Also 2 more things!

    I CANT WAIT TO SEE DRACO AND HARRYS FUNNY FRIEND DYNAMIC SLOWLY FORM

    also was Snape angry at both Harry and umbridge Harry for getting "himself" in trouble him seeing him again and umbridge using those tactics on him?



    Author's Response:

    Let’s just say that Harry sees Snape’s angry glare and believes it’s entirely directed at him, when in reality, it’s much more than that. Having attended many Death Eater meetings, Snape recognises the signs of the Cruciatus Curse and immediately understands what has happened. He’s furious, especially at the number of times it’s been cast.

     

    Also, I think Snape cares deeply about Hogwarts, and seeing that a real torture took place within the ‘sacred’ walls of the castle enrages him. Not to mention the fact that he feels he’s failed once again in his promise to Lily.

     

    By the way, I don’t know why, but every time I send a response, I end up sending it twice. I’m really clumsy, lol.

     

    Ah, I almost forgot! I’d like to create a dynamic of unity between the houses, so they can come together against the “pink witch.” This will probably lead to a reluctant alliance forming between Draco and Harry.

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 12:47 am
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Okay first off love love love!!! This is my train of thought what I hope to see don't bother taking my advice btw just want it out there, I'm hoping first Snape takes his anger out on Harry for umbridge hurting him and at some point Snape reluctantly steps up and protects Harry. What I also hope is he continues his investigation on Harry's home life forcing him to answer questions also him keeping a eye on him more though still mean. ALSO what if Harry confesses something to Draco and Draco snitches on him to Snape. At some point Snape starts using his authority on Harry to give him father son like punishments in a hilarious way like silencio him for 5 min sticky charm him to a chair 😭. I really pray to see snape getting pissed at black for his actions like hear me out what if when those two talk what if black slaps Harry and Snape sees this. Still I hope to see Snape mean side on cuz I feel like that really represents his personality mean and grungy but can show affection at some points. Just spitting out ideas cuz I'm a horrible writer and I love your writing pieces and I hope to see the next chapter soon!!!! (WHEN IM OBSESSED) also curious how did Sirius survive from Bellatrix like any contexttt anyways lots of loveee get some sleep lol



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I must say, your enthusiasm is really contagious right now. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I think I’ll be able to meet most of your expectations as it aligns with what I initially wanted to write. I think as their relationship develops, I’ll definitely let my imagination run wild. Of course, Snape could never go too far with punishments, given Harry’s childhood, so he’ll have to come up with something more creative (I’m being wicked, but I’m already having fun imagining what I could do).

     

    As for Sirius Black, I’m not a huge fan of him, mainly because of how he treated Severus, and also for other reasons. Regarding whether he survives Bellatrix, I’m still unsure what to do. Bear in mind, we’re in the fifth year, and the battle at the Ministry hasn’t happened yet, so Sirius isn’t dead at this point.

     

    I’m not sure whether to change this plot point; on one hand, if Sirius dies, Harry would have nowhere to go, and Snape could step in and take him in, though reluctantly.

     

    I have so many ideas buzzing around in my head, but seeing what you’d like to read, I’m happy to tell you that you won’t be disappointed.

     

    A greeting from Italy! It’s 2 am here, I don’t know why I’m still awake at this hour, maybe you’re right, I’ll try to switch off my brain lol.

    Hope to see you tomorrow with another chapter!



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I must say, your enthusiasm is really contagious right now. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I think I’ll be able to meet most of your expectations as it aligns with what I initially wanted to write. I think as their relationship develops, I’ll definitely let my imagination run wild. Of course, Snape could never go too far with punishments, given Harry’s childhood, so he’ll have to come up with something more creative (I’m being wicked, but I’m already having fun imagining what I could do).

     

    As for Sirius Black, I’m not a huge fan of him, mainly because of how he treated Severus, and also for other reasons. Regarding whether he survives Bellatrix, I’m still unsure what to do. Bear in mind, we’re in the fifth year, and the battle at the Ministry hasn’t happened yet, so Sirius isn’t dead at this point.

     

    I’m not sure whether to change this plot point; on one hand, if Sirius dies, Harry would have nowhere to go, and Snape could step in and take him in, though reluctantly.

     

    I have so many ideas buzzing around in my head, but seeing what you’d like to read, I’m happy to tell you that you won’t be disappointed.

     

    A greeting from Italy! It’s 2 am here, I don’t know why I’m still awake at this hour, maybe you’re right, I’ll try to switch off my brain lol.

    Hope to see you tomorrow with another chapter!

Title: 10)Return 25 Nov 2024 5:27 am
Reviewer: appelsinchoklad (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter as always.
    I am so curious to know what she will do to Harry, especially since knowing she crossed the line. I can’t wait. I will check for an update several times a day 😃
    I am also looking forward to see if Harry can forgive Snape when Snape finally comes around

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I’m delighted you enjoyed the chapter. I won’t keep you waiting long to reveal what that despicable woman has in store for him. As for the rest, I’ll just say that Harry, in my view, has always had an incredible capacity for forgiveness. We’ll see if that capacity extends to the man who made his life a living hell for five years.

Title: 10)Return 25 Nov 2024 4:15 am
Reviewer: FrackPockets (Signed) [Report This]
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Title: 10)Return 25 Nov 2024 4:15 am
Reviewer: andrea89 (Signed) [Report This]

    Oooo wonder what she had planned!



    Author's Response:

    I fear I’ve been particularly cruel this time, even by my own standards…

Title: 10)Return 25 Nov 2024 2:31 am
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Wait what's your timezone I'm pst and I don't think we got the same evening time 😭



    Author's Response:

    I’m Italian, so I believe the time difference between our time zones is 9 hours. That means when it’s 10 PM here, it’s probably 1 PM for you. I usually post at odd hours—it’s even happened that I’ve posted at what was 2 AM for me—so I don’t really have a set schedule.

Title: 10)Return 24 Nov 2024 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Mozalini (Signed) [Report This]

    Completely loving this story. I check back every day for a new chapter! Fantastic. And a cliffie too! 



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying my story!



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying my story!

Title: 10)Return 24 Nov 2024 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, dang. It's just one thing after another with poor Harry. What's Umbridge going to do to him???

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, I know, I’ve been particularly cruel this time! No spoilers, but you’ll probably find out what happens to poor Harry tomorrow evening (if all goes as planned, I should be able to upload it).

Title: 10)Return 24 Nov 2024 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    LOVE LOVE LOVE CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. I’m really happy that my story has received such a positive response; it’s incredibly motivating and inspires me to write even more. At first, I wasn’t even sure about posting it, so I’m really glad you’re enjoying it.



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. I’m really happy that my story has received such a positive response; it’s incredibly motivating and inspires me to write even more. At first, I wasn’t even sure about posting it, so I’m really glad you’re enjoying it.

Title: 9)Truth 23 Nov 2024 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    That was painful. Severus says he doesn’t tolerate bullies while being a bully to a person under his authority! What a hypocrite! I was too caught up in the story to notice any mistakes.

    Author's Response:

    I know, I know, Severus is cruel and hypocritical at first. In my opinion, Snape’s character is too complex. He hates bullies because of his childhood, between his father and the Marauders. This has made him the resentful and angry person he is.

    And while he hates bullies and bullying in general, he behaves like one towards Harry because he’s James Potter’s son. Let’s just say that when it comes to Harry, Severus doesn’t follow his true moral compass. He’s driven by a resentment that’s been rooted in him for more than half his life.

    I don’t think he even sees Harry as a person at first, more like the reincarnation of James Potter. I’m not sure if I’ve explained myself well, but when it comes to talking about my favourite characters, I tend to lose track of the conversation a bit.

    What I want to do with this story is maintain Snape’s initial character, where he behaves cruelly towards Harry because he only sees him as James Potter’s son. Then, I want him to recognise the similarities with Lily, and finally, if all goes well, to appreciate him for simply being Harry.

    I always enjoy exchanging opinions, and I’m grateful to you for reviewing.


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