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Reviews For Left Behind
Esto fue épico (r88;x07;r88;▽r88;x06;r88;)
Esto fue épico (r88;x07;r88;▽r88;x06;r88;)
I wanted to add that I keep thinking about this story today! It's only one chapter in but I think it's such a great start. I could really feel the characters emotions and feelings while reading this and just can't wait to see what happens next!! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you, a very long chapter to begin with but you have set the scene really well and your description of the orphanage was very clear and made us see what you were trying to convey. I've a feeling that Severus's arrival does not bode well for Harry
You writing is so beautiful! Can't wait for the next chapter.
What an excellent start! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Super intriguinged... looking forward to see where you'll be taking this!
I have one small thing to note.. the chapter has some repetitive paragraphs as if you have drafted the first pragragh then finalized it in next. but otherwise I like it very well ,keep up the good work Author's Response: Ah drat! Thank you for catching that. Late night editing and forgetting to remove things. oops! Fixing them now :)
And I love the length, too. Feel free to always get "carried away." :) |
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