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Reviews For Snape Didn't Miss
I absolutely love this story. Snape seemed so patient with Harry's amnesia after being so angry and reactive before. Snape must have felt so panicked after the jar hit Harry's head. You'd think a seeker with bludger reflexes would of ducked. So in this version does Sirius stay alive? I loved reading this story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it!
I loved this. Snape's "No, I am [in detention]" -- that was a stellar line. It sounds like some kind of absurdist humor until you reflect that oh, Snape is kind of stuck here with a wet, dripping, confused teenager, for hours, and he's stuck there babysitting (and probably feeling a bit guilty) for presumably hours -- yeah, that does sound a lot like detention, which he probably deserves for chucking that jar. Cosmic justice. And I love how your Snape feels so IC. This absolutely feels like the canon Snape who could have thrown the jar, which I think is important since this fic follows so closely from that event. I loved his dialogue. Thank you for writing this!
I enjoyed this so much! I lowkey wish there was more, but I think it's neat how you could totally integrate this into canon as well. I'm kinda really into the idea pf Snape having pegged Harry right in the noggin when he threw the jar. Can defo see that as a jumping off point for severitus.
Definitely dumbledore would have made them continue. Thank you an unusual but interesting story thank you
Took me a second to understand what Snape didn't miss, but dang! What a fic! I really liked, especially Harry's POV and how you portrayed Snape! (:
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I enjoyed this story so much! To be honest I checked if someone wrote a something for this prompt every couple weeks and I'm so happy to read it! Really loved Snape's suffering while waiting for Pomfrey. "Am I in detention? - No, I am" That made laugh so hard XD And how he understands that what he did was absolutely idiotic move XD And a happy ending, yay! Thank you for this story!
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