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Reviews For Transformative Encounter
Yes, it will be interesting to see Snape's reaction if he ever remembers cutting down his potions professor.
To the author: I am judging your chacacters for their food choices.
I like ham & cheese...was not expecting that from Snape...well played :D
It annoys me that Dubledore is always so oblivious to what his students actually need :-{
Very on par with cannon Dumbledore to just say: "Here, Harry, do this." And then explains nothing lol
Ah! This is the first fic I read with Snape losing his memory! I am intrigued!
This is amazing. Woah. What a setup, what a premise. What anxiety and drama! Snape asking if he ever hurt Harry and Lily? This is intense! And Snape offering to set up Harry's room... that has got to be so awkward for Harry to pretend to be Snape's son. Snape might be mortified when he gets his memory back. But I hope by then that he would come to like Harry for himself, and take any anger out on Dumbledore instead of Harry. Snape is wonderfully in character. Fantastic work!
Oh wow. I am not liking Dumbledore here but I am loving his plan. Your Harry is so full of emotions and thoughts. It is so delightful to read such a full and reactive version of Harry. He's wonderfully in character but also more teenager childlike. I prefer this version to the version of canon book Harry who often felt blank. Snape probably thinks Harry is reacing in grief to the mention of his mother who just died. I'm loving this story so far! Great set up.
Interesting how Severus acknowledges that Lily wouldn't stay with him. He's not going to be happy when he realizes he was fooled.
Even Dudley's second bedroom is beginning to look appealing. Intriguing beginning. |
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