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Reviews For The Curse
Title: Chapter 16 01 Dec 2025 10:40 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]

    Great chapter!

Title: Chapter 15 28 Nov 2025 5:07 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]

    Excellent chapter!



    Author's Response:

    Thank you!
    Lady

Title: Chapter 14 28 Nov 2025 5:03 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]

    Good chapter!



    Author's Response:

    Thank you, little voice!
    I’ve just found out that you write as well.
    I hope I’ll be able to read something of yours today.
    See you soon.
    Lady

Title: Chapter 14 14 Nov 2025 8:29 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]

    Loved this chapter. Poor Snape. Why does he have to punish himself so much? I wonder if Harry will be affected in the future by the pain due to the curse.

     

    I had to catch up with a couple of chapters. I think one reason why there might be fewer viewers is simply that I believe it’s a very busy time, and the email notification hasn’t worked, so people might have missed that you posted. (But it is fixed now.)



    Author's Response:

    Hi Spirit!
    Thank you — your comments are always really lovely to read.
    Sorry it took me so long to reply, but I was on vacation and then had to catch up at work.
    But now I’m back, more energized than ever!
    I have so many ideas to put on paper… or better, on the keyboard…
    Thank you also for the info, though I think it might be because I changed the story’s tags. Some people thought it was a Snarry.
    I’ve written two of them — not graphic — because I’m not good at writing Romance scenes, and one of them is almost a comedy.
    Oops, sorry, I rambled on.
    See you soon!
    Lady

Title: Chapter 13 11 Nov 2025 12:53 am
Reviewer: ppnix (Signed) [Report This]

    Great story!  I'm hooked!!



    Author's Response:

    Grazie mille, vocina!
    Posso chiederti da dove scrivi e se la traduzione ti sembra corretta?
    Grazie e a presto
    !

Title: Chapter 12 01 Nov 2025 4:53 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the update! I'm still reading. I don't always leave a comment as I get signed out of this site every time I leave, and don't want to sign back in again every time, lol!

    Your story is very intriguing, and somewhat unique: so it's very fun to see where it's going!

    Sometimes words or phrases aren't quite correct: I'm assuming this is because English isn't your native language, correct? I just read past it and understand what you meant, so it's not a bother. An example from this particular chapter would be using the pronoun "she" for Lucius as well as the potion Snape is taking (whereas we would use "he" and "it," respectively). Sometimes phrases you have Snape say seem more modern and casual than one would expect him to say in canon: but again, it's a style and doesn't have to be exactly like canon!

    There are some other times when small actions don't flow properly in the narrative: for example, in this chapter Snape was busy reading while Harry was writing lines, but the next time you describe Snape you say he was "still looking at Harry." So there's a jump in action from him reading (presumably papers or a book) to him "continuing" to look at Harry, though it was never described that he had begun to do so. I've noticed jumps like this in other chapters as well. AGAIN: I just fill in the blanks so no worries! I'm just giving feedback because you asked.

    Otherwise, as stated, it's an interesting and enjoyable story. :) Thank you!

    Author's Response:

    Hi!

    Thank you so much! This feedback is really valuable and will help me improve a lot. These are very constructive and useful points.
    If you don’t mind, I’d love it if you could let me know whenever you notice something important in the future.

    I’ll also ask my friends who check the translations to pay even closer attention.

    Thanks again for the review and your help!

     

    Best wishes,
    Lady

Title: Chapter 12 31 Oct 2025 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Who knows why there’s a drop in readers. It could be the time crunch of school starting up again or some other reason that doesn’t reflect on the story quality. I’m still here and finding the story enjoyable. Snape’s over the top punishment when he loves to goad Harry is so annoying, totally in character but still frustrating. I find myself emotionally invested in this story and occasionally surprised by the plot. Both things make me happy when I see that you’re updated.

    Author's Response:

    Hi Vocina,
    thank you for your explanation!
    The how and when a story is updated really make a big difference.
    I’ve noticed that lately my updates have been a bit irregular, changing both the day and the time.

    I think I’ve realized that reading habits can be quite different.
    Here in Italy, we often read for long stretches, especially on weekends;
    while you, living in such amazing places, might be doing other things on weekends?

    Well, I’ll find out… I’ll get some help from Professor Trelawney’s inner eye.
    I just hope she doesn’t predict my premature disappearance… Haha!

    Thank you so much for reading my story; I’m really happy that you’re enjoying it.
    I know Snape is overbearing and unfair, and Harry sometimes struggles to keep control…

    I completely understand how frustrating it can be to wait while a story unfolds, especially when you just want to know what happens next.
    Sometimes you feel like skipping ahead, reading more pages, exploring every detail… and I totally get it!

    I can only ask you to enjoy every step of this journey.
    Every chapter, every scene, is meant to let you experience the emotions alongside the characters.
    The story is already fully written in my language, and the translation is progressing steadily.
    You can trust me: I never leave my stories unfinished. Never.

     

    A big hug,
    Lady

Title: Chapter 9 -Sorting- 23 Oct 2025 7:01 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, grumpy teenage Snape, lol. Great chapter! I thought Hermione might notice Severus’s slip from the last chapter… I’m very curious to see if this comes back to bite Snape later. I also love Harry and Snape feeling each other’s emotions. This sounds like it will be a lot of fun (for everyone else).

    Author's Response: I absolutely adore your comments! I think, like me, you really enjoy the mix of intense and funny scenes. I love writing because it lets me explore all the absurd situations I can imagine. Thank you so much for all your feedback. Hugs, Lady
Title: Chapter 8 19 Oct 2025 7:41 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]
    I am caught up! Severus arguing with himself was hilarious. I hope you have planned more of this.

    Author's Response: You know, I can’t really remember! Maybe there’s something similar coming up later on. But trust me — you won’t get bored. There’s so much still to discover. Hugs Lady
Title: Chapter 7 -Student or Teacher?- 19 Oct 2025 7:39 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]
    I can see McGonagall having fun. Nice confrontation between the two.

    Author's Response: I absolutely adore Minerva! I use her all the time in my stories. She will have a beautiful evolution throughout the narrative. Hugs, Lady

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