Fascinating start to the story. You've really captured Harry's heightened senses, so I can visualize him taking in everything through both his human senses and his wolf senses. I can't imagine how he'll deal with Hogwarts... In Diagon Alley, he's pretty much an onlooker, but at school, he'll be required to interact with dozens to hundreds of students on a daily basis. Poor Harry! I hope he can make some friends quickly!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it despite the formatting problem. I didn't want to make Harry OP off the bat. It will not be easy for him and he'll find himself in trouble in the second chapter for something through no fault of his own.
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