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Reviews For Godric's Hollow
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2025 5:25 am
Reviewer: llpi (Signed) [Report This]

    The spell should be "Obliviate" (as per English language canon) not "Oblivion."

    Did Snape remove Harry's entire memory of the cemetary visit or just the part from when Snape arrived?

    It would be nice if he or Mme Pomfrey noticed the blood quill injuries to his hand.



    Author's Response:

    Hi!
    Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for your message.

    I’ve corrected the name of the spell — I thought spell names were the same, so thank you for pointing it out.

    As for the plot, for now I can’t make any changes. This is a one-shot, written as a gift for an Italian fan who always comments and gives me a lot of feedback. It’s something I started doing a few months ago and I use it as “training.”

     

    All my one-shots work this way: a fan tells me what they would like to read, and I develop the piece from that request. In this case, they asked for an angst piece set in the graveyard on October 31st, during fifth year.

    To answer your question, anyway:
    Snape erases the entire memory. Harry will think he never left the castle.
    in one of the other two one-shots, Snape finds out. I just don’t remember whether it’s in Legilimens or in Untouchable.

    I hope to hear from you again.
    I wish you a good read.
    See you soon,
    Lady

     


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