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Reviews For A Different Life
Title: Stranger 16 Jan 2006 8:14 am
Reviewer: Vanaondoiel (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow, this is such an interesting story.  I can't wait to read more :)  Interesting take, and I like the more Slytherin Harry.  ^^

    Blessings,

    Vana 

Title: Of Bullies, Daniel, and School 26 Nov 2005 1:05 am
Reviewer: Oxygen (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Aww I love smart-Harry! can't wait to read the rest. Update soon.

     -- Oxy --

Title: Stranger 20 Nov 2005 2:11 am
Reviewer: cariluv (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is pretty cool, love the orphange idea, I've never really seen it before. I hope to read more soon!
Title: Discoveries and a new friend 06 Nov 2005 9:05 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting but occasioinaly hard to follow
Title: Stranger 10 Sep 2005 7:06 am
Reviewer: heather (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is.. odd. i assume luc is snape? jamie's brother or something?
Title: Stranger 17 Jun 2005 4:37 am
Reviewer: Yar Matey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just read this and this is really good. Please keep up the good work!
Title: Stranger 26 May 2005 4:39 pm
Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I actually likedthat story... What's going to be in the next chapter?!
Title: Stranger 19 Mar 2005 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Torina Archelda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it, but who is Luc? At first I thought it was Lucius (which would be creepy, BTW) and then you said he had dark hair so I thought it was Sev, but then you called him Luc in a speaker tag, so it can't just be a nickname... I'm confused! lol. Please update soon, I love this fic!
Title: Stranger 26 Feb 2005 3:37 am
Reviewer: Anortai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmm, for a 6-yr old the clarity in his mind of what is happening is astounding. As is his vocabulary. You say he reads lots of books, but he still would use contractions like don't and won't. And as he is English shouldn't his grammar be at least a little off? (jk :P) You have a very good concept to start on, but i think you need to delve into the conciousness of the characters a bit more- it seems a superficial story up untill chapter 8. I'm guessing that Luc- is Snape? because that would fit the requirements of this site then wouldnt it? Plus the mention of obisidan eyes... Rather astounding don't you think? Another point is the originality of the name Sandy, all snakes that become Harry's pet seemed to be named Sandy. Overall, a good concept but Harry is too grown up. Being so intellectually advanced is simply not possible for a 5-6 yr old. He needs to be more child-like. Let him have some fun.
Title: Stranger 20 Feb 2005 11:40 pm
Reviewer: ennui deMorte (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter!! I love seeing Severus swooping in like some avenging archangel. Hope there is more soon!

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