Ah... this is better - i didn't quite want Albus to be a bad guy...
I can't remember when you wrote this (and am too lazy to check! (; ) But I thought the consequences you gave for the wizards oath were nicer than the death given in the actual books. I think you've managed to keep Snape in character too, which is great. And it's nice how Harry is in control of himself! The wand idea was good - I thought the observation you made 'he should not have difficulty killing the maniac.' was clever - I had not actually thought of that *Slight* problem before! Well done!
Ooh! The ending was exciting!
this is an awesome story please please please write more
| Title: Thirty
| 15 Jul 2008 4:42 am
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| Reviewer: Wendy (Anonymous)
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Simply an awesome story. I can't wait for the continuation!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Twenty Eight
| 06 Jul 2008 11:11 am
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| Reviewer: Stephanie (Anonymous)
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you changed it from MI6 to MI5. that is all.
| Title: Thirty
| 04 Jul 2008 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Morrolan (Anonymous)
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Love this so much! Please update soon!
I really love this story. it been a long time since the story was updated. i hope you didn't abandon this story.
What a wonderful, lovely fanfiction!! Your characterizations are amazing, and I love all of your original characters! I noticed that you haven't updated this is a really long time, and I sincerely hope that you haven't abandoned it. I thought I should point out, though, that when Harry first meets Dylan and Joseph, they are MI6 agents, but later they are MI5. Also, why did Severus not recognize Dylie? I mean, he might not have remembered who he was (it has been a long time, after all), but surely he would have thought the man looked very familiar? Just a thought...I don't normally read SuperPower!Harry fics, because they tend to be lame and unrealistic (suddenly poof! Harry has new powers and goes off to defeat the bad guys an insanely short amount of time later); but this fic has some nice depth to it, and I am thoroughly enjoying it. Please, please update soon!! If there is anything I can do to help (beta, or just someone to bounce ideas off of, or whatever) just let me know!
| Title: Eight
| 25 Sep 2007 12:10 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::glares with pleasure while Phil Snape nods in approval::
Good. I was afraid Sev wouldn't have any powers. Can he turn into a dragon and a pheonix like Harry too? ::moans with delight:: I really do love this story; update soon. I can't wait to read more and see Sev's reaction to his new Mommy.
::cackles insanely while Phil stares at his wife with concern::
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
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