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Title: A Small Break in the Storm 27 May 2005 1:23 pm
Reviewer: Tamara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is good. It's believable and the characters aren't OOC. Good thing too, it didn't turn out like those other stories where Snape becomes sickeningly nice. Good Job :)
Title: A Small Break in the Storm 22 May 2005 9:29 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a pretty good story. Will definately look out for your next one.
Title: A Deadly Confrontation 04 May 2005 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Agent (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know you don’t like to hear this, but . . . Snape’s dialogue is unconvincing, as is the manner in which he fights McCourn. It simply doesn’t seem real. Interesting, but just a story..
Title: Dark Meeting Places 19 Apr 2005 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Nienna Telrunya (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, disapperate outside of Hogwarts and then run, I think. Yes, good plan. Hmm. Must think more on this before comprehensive review, but one spot of critique: why would Snape be so careless as to not go back to Snape Manor or Hogwarts before speaking to Harry again? It seems rather unlike him. Cheers.
Title: A Learning Experience 18 Apr 2005 5:25 pm
Reviewer: virginserpent (Anonymous) [Report This]
    keep up the good work!
Title: A Learning Experience 11 Apr 2005 5:20 pm
Reviewer: Stacee Phelps (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please, continue this story! It's so good, and I want to see Harry alive again! Besides, it's fun reading him going off on Snape. Please, I need more! This story is so good! ~*~Stacee Phelps~*~
Title: A Learning Experience 08 Apr 2005 3:34 am
Reviewer: Water Drifter (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!!! I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you'll update again very soon, but I'll understand if you don't (I know what life can be like sometimes). I'll try to review every chapter from now on but if I don't know that I'm still reading your story but I just don't have time to stop and review!
Title: A Learning Experience 05 Apr 2005 7:44 am
Reviewer: Nienna Telrunya (Anonymous) [Report This]
    EXcellent, very excellent. Hee, hee. Wow, that just made my day (and extended it about two hours longer than intended, because I just couldn't stop reading.) I eagerly await your next part . . . very, very good. I thought the Dursley's reactions were right on, as were . . . well, everyone's. Wonderful charactizations, in other words. Bravo.
Title: A Learning Experience 05 Apr 2005 4:47 am
Reviewer: glassdragon2 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good stroy! It has a very interesting idea... never read a story that started with Harry dieing lol. Cool chappie.
Title: A Long Night 29 Mar 2005 7:36 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus never changes does he? Interesting premise so far. Definetly an origional take as far as I can tell.

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