The second plane trip was a surprise. At least they were able to get something to eat during the layover between flights. Snape won't be happy about a commuter flight. They can be bumpier than the bigger planes.
Author's Response: Hehe grumpy Snape is so fun to read and write about. To me, he has to be a bit grumpy to be in character. :)
The second plane trip was a surprise. At least they were able to get something to eat during the layover between flights. Snape won't be happy about a commuter flight. They can be bumpier than the bigger planes.
Author's Response: Grumpy Snape was so amusing to write. Thanks for your comments!
I liked that the airport and plane ride were written from Harry's point of view. So he primarily thinks like a 6 year old and has to concentrate if he wants to access his teenage memories and abilities. It was fun reading his viewpoint of the experience.
Author's Response: Yes, it is an interesting situation for Harry to be in. I plan to have the potion revert him to his 16 year old consciousness at some point. We shall see. :)
If Albus thinks that Harry's proximity to Voldemort affects his scar, I wonder if Snape's mark will be affected by being further away from Voldy? I also wonder what the tea set is for? Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: I think Snape's Dark Mark will be better as well due to the distance. :) Thanks for the review.
I love the description of the taste of the potion - like sunshine, grass, swing sets and excitement. Things I loved as a child. I also liked that things looked bigger to Harry. It's always a shock to me when I see something that I remember as a child now when I am an adult and am stunned how much smaller it is than I remember years ago.
Author's Response: Absolutely spot on! Thanks for noticing and commenting!
I wondered when Snape would turn up. He must have just been knocked out when he was captured and not badly hurt. Since he was raised in a Muggle household, I wouldn't think that being disguised as a Muggle would be too difficult of Severus. Don't know how he and Hoppity will get on though. They sound as different as night and day.
Author's Response: Yes, Snape should be able to pretend to be a Muggle alright, but he has been a wizard for over a decade. He and Hoppity are certainly opposites! Thank you for your review!
Hoppity is an odd name but she sounds like a Hoppity. She has that Dumbledore eccentricity. I look forward to seeing how well she relates to Muggles.
Author's Response: Thank you for giving her a chance!
Interesting first chapter. So Peter Pettigrew is dead and Remus took him down. That's certainly poetic justice. I like the idea of Harry going to America. The deaging should help conceal his identity, too.
Author's Response: Yes, I thought so too. :) Thank you for your review!
Please please update!!!!! I love this story so much!!!! I have read it like 30 times!!! I only just became a member but I read I offline. I think it is absolutely brilliant and you are an amazing author! Could you please update soon or at least tell me when you think you could update? I can't wait to keep reading!! Thank you so much and I really hope you can reply to me. I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so sorry! I know it took forever to update but I will try to do amazingly better. :)
No!!! This is not possible, you cannot leave at that! Are you going to update? I love this story and have been reading it the last 2 days, even skipping precious hours of sleep... And then, I see "to be continued"... I hope you'll get back to it :)
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I know it took forever to update but I will try to do amazingly better. :) Thank you!
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