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Reviews For Graduation
Harry is so mature here...you can see how the war has affected him so, and all his classmates as well. I loved how you put in bits about them, so we can see how much they've all grown and changed. It's bittersweet, because these changes have brought them closer, and in some cases perhaps made them better people than they would have otherwise been, but the cost has been so high. Harry's speech was wonderful, and so were the doe and stag Patronuses (Patroni?)...if only James and Lily could have been there. And of course, I loved the relationship that has developed between Harry and Severus, and I'd love to see more, too! Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review! Although I tend to read (and write) about how the war affected Harry and the other main characters of his generation, I thought it would be interesting to add some details about the rest of his classmates-- who have been just as affected as the main characters, in some cases. I've never actually written any dialogue for Snape before, so it was fun to try and write the relationship between Harry and Severus and the conversations between them. Once again, thank you for your review!
I really liked your Snape and Harry...wish I could hear more of their conversations and I'm happy they found a way to relate. Thanks for the great story!
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