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Reviews For Graduation
Title: Chapter 1 02 Jan 2024 1:23 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was nice!
Title: Chapter 1 21 Jul 2014 8:06 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 9:50 pm
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so moving. Loved it well done :)
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jun 2009 4:08 am
Reviewer: Phoenix Phyre (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a good story, well written and enjoyable, though short.
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jan 2008 12:14 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this! It's even better than your other story!

    Harry is so mature here...you can see how the war has affected him so, and all his classmates as well. I loved how you put in bits about them, so we can see how much they've all grown and changed. It's bittersweet, because these changes have brought them closer, and in some cases perhaps made them better people than they would have otherwise been, but the cost has been so high.

    Harry's speech was wonderful, and so were the doe and stag Patronuses (Patroni?)...if only James and Lily could have been there.

    And of course, I loved the relationship that has developed between Harry and Severus, and I'd love to see more, too!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your kind review! Although I tend to read (and write) about how the war affected Harry and the other main characters of his generation, I thought it would be interesting to add some details about the rest of his classmates-- who have been just as affected as the main characters, in some cases.

    I've never actually written any dialogue for Snape before, so it was fun to try and write the relationship between Harry and Severus and the conversations between them.

    Once again, thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 1 16 Jan 2008 8:20 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    I completely agree with another reviewer - I also wish this wasn't a one shot. I throughly enjoyed your story. As for so many of us, DH's ending left me wanting so much more and you really filled in some the possible "blanks" wonderfully for me!

    I really liked your Snape and Harry...wish I could hear more of their conversations and I'm happy they found a way to relate.

    Thanks for the great story!
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jan 2008 5:37 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really good. The doe and the stag on the stage was a wonderful touch. That was an excellent way to make it seem as if Lily and James were watching over Harry. I really liked how Harry went to Snape in the end too. It's good to see them getting along so well. Well written and very nicely done!

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