Way to fast. Harry wouldn't have acted like a normal child that fast.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Nov 2013 4:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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I love this story! Especially the corporal punishment involved in it! Please don't abandon this wonderful story!
Here's an idea: Harry always mentions how mean people were to him, and always declares that he is a freak, so Severus makes him write lines 'I am not a freak' a lot of times and give him a spanking?
This story is really amazing and I not only WANT to read more, but I NEED to read more! Please... I beg you!!!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 23 Apr 2013 4:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Kimberly (Anonymous)
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Overall I liked it. Unfortunately, I missed your warning. A Golden Rule - never spank previously abused children.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 18 Jan 2013 1:31 pm
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| Reviewer: bg (Anonymous)
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I like fics!!!! updapet soon!=)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Aug 2010 4:43 am
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| Reviewer: Raven (Anonymous)
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I really love the idea of this story! It's awesome. I like how you slowly and skillfully developed Harry's and Severus' relationship to one of father and son. I hope to see more of this.
PS- I'm glad to see that Snape hugged the kid after he punished him. I think that shows a big difference between Harry's situation with the Dursleys and his with Snape.
this is really good!! poor harry... wonder what's going to happen next... please update whenever you can!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Jun 2009 6:43 am
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| Reviewer: Alice (Anonymous)
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I think that Harry is still abused. By Severus this time
this story looks like it will be extremely good, i'm glad harry got away from his relatives and they got what they deserved, harry now will have a dad who will care and be there for him at all times, well i hope the adoption goes without a hitch
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 May 2008 10:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous)
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Loved this - hope you carry it on. well done
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