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Title: Defense Against the...Snape? 12 Jun 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really fun as a story. But you have a major problem. You've said that Harry is standing with his wand in Dumbledore's office (when he's knocked his chair over) but then in the dorm he searches for it in his cloak! I think Dobby was good, and the Dursley's work well.

    Author's Response:


     Thanks for pointing out my error with Harry's wand!  My first several chapters were not beta read, so I missed that little bit.  I've gone back and fixed it.  Good catch! :)

    Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy HP and the Map of Discoveries.



Title: Defense Against the...Snape? 12 Jun 2008 3:08 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I actually liked how this last chapter ended. Is this going to turn into another Snape is really his father story? Not that I'm complaining, mind you. You hinted earlier that Harry's hair was growing for the first time in years and the only person he could have gotten that from was Snape. And he kept cutting off Petunia when she wanted to say something. Your Snape was very in character.

    Author's Response:


    Thanks for your review!  Yes, this will be 'another Snape is really Harry's father' story, but I hope that the events that I have planned for future chapters will be unique enough to keep you interested! :)

Title: Defense Against the...Snape? 11 Jun 2008 5:39 pm
Reviewer: ivys (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a great story,update soon!
Title: Defense Against the...Snape? 11 Jun 2008 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    As usual the Vernon is making a pig of himself (he did not need any help from Dobby) and Petunia is just awful but I think Dudley just like any teenager just wants to explore and have fun in a magical castle I mean what child wouldn't want to.
    Snape and Harry both need time in a naughty corner LOL, but I'm sure they would soon become friends as Snape would not stand for any abuse of any child and with the Dursleys there he might have to protect Harry again and again, and Harry spending time with Snape might let him tolerate him more but as he protects Harry the boy would look to him more
    In order to find Dudley all Harry has to do is take out his Map.
Title: Defense Against the...Snape? 11 Jun 2008 2:37 pm
Reviewer: graenr (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this, please continue. Please forgive lack of specifics due to insomnia.
Title: Prologue: Rescuing the Map 11 Jun 2008 6:23 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    After reviewing that last chapter, I realized I'd read it before- on ff.net. Good to see you posted it here as well though! :)
Title: Defense Against the...Snape? 11 Jun 2008 6:20 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Stupid Dudley had to go and get lost. I liked the dueling between Harry and Snape. Good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!

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