Reviews For Harry Potter and the Map of Discoveries
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like it. You'll find out the answer to your question (at least part of it) in the next chapter :)
Author's Response: lol...too obvious or maybe cliche? Yes, it is a Severitus, but hopefully the discovery will prove to be unique! Hope you like it ;)
I love the way you're writing this genre with the twins. So many authors here focus solely on the Slytherin side of the story. Yay for you!
Author's Response: Thanks! I knew I wanted to add in how the twins discovered the map, but I had so much fun writing them and got such a great response from readers that I had to include them much more than I originally planned! I glad you like it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! No, that would be horrible if Snape and Harry liked each other all of the sudden! I'll do my best to keep it as canon as possible :)
I like your story very much! The interaction between the characters is very convincing and - at times - quite amusing!
I liked your mock battle and the fact that you didn't make Harry into either a complete idiot or a genius, but a person able and willing to learn! And since this is a Severitus I'm looking forward to the revelation and Snape's reaction... Thanx for a wonderful story so far, and please don't let us hanging here for too long (even though RL can be a bitch and all...)!!!
Author's Response: LOL...thanks for the review! I always hated cliffies as a reader, but as a writer they make such natural places to end a chapter. I'll do my best to get the next Ch. out quickly!
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! I've tried hard to make this fic unique, so I hope you enjoy it :)
I love your story, and I'm really anxious for the bomb to drop when Snape and Harry find out that they are father and son!
I'm glad you like this fic! The new chapter will be up before the end of August. It will still be a few chapters before at least one of them realize their relationship, but I hope you will enjoy how the plot unfolds.
Thanks for the review!
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