I really enjoyed the big reveal. I like how well developed Rhiannon’s character is. You’ve made her so believable.
|Title: Diamonds Aren't a Girls Best Friend
||23 Feb 2022 5:05 pm
|Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
I love how you’re portraying Harry and Draco as normal teenage boys, and skillfully navigating their complicated histories and magical realities. I wonder if Harry will have any more seer dreams.
The scene at the pool felt painful. That uncle is the worst.
I’m enjoying the poolside summer through eyes. Very nice, thank you.
I loved this example of Severus being a great dad. Not meddling in Draco’s romantic life, but rather supporting him regardless.
Thinking Draco’s a stage magician! I almost died with laughter. His reaction was spot on.
An enjoyable chapter, thank you. I hope Draco doesn’t get his heart broken.
I love your wonderfully long and immersive chapters, thank you.
I hope the boys can settle down soon and give poor Snape a break from all the sniping.