I'm still reading! :) I was glad for the summary actually, because it took me moment to remember everything that happened lol. The reactions sounded right to me and I look forward to reading this to the end.
| Title: Breakdown
| 04 Mar 2014 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I liked this chapter as it helped me to remember what had happened! Thank you
| Title: Breakdown
| 04 Mar 2014 4:51 am
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| Reviewer: jgroovydaisy (Anonymous)
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glad to see another chapter. Enjoyed this whole story and of course this bit of it too. :)
I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!! I felt like you did do the characters justice, so I'm hoping for more soon! Please update again! :)
| Title: Mi Casa Es Su Casa
| 11 Nov 2013 9:40 am
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| Reviewer: Abby (Anonymous)
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Good story writing skills (every creative mind can use a good editor), and I enjoyed to this point. Since the characters strayed too radically from their creation by JKR, I am out. Best of luck! Keep writing!
| Title: Summer With Severus
| 09 Nov 2013 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: Abby (Anonymous)
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Cool meditation-type tips! Thanks! The watch reminded me of the clock at the Burrows. Very good read.
| Title: Cleared Vision
| 08 Nov 2013 2:52 pm
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| Title: Prologue
| 07 Nov 2013 8:14 am
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| Reviewer: Abby (Anonymous)
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Nice start, interesting enough to pursue. Needs proofreading and grammar editing. Good job overall!
Well, that's a fine twist! Eagerly waiting for more. :-)
Oh my goodness, it's been so long! Glad to see you're back and haven't given up on this story! I'm sorry to see that it's coming to an end but once it's over, I'll be able to go back and reread this whole wonderful tale all over again!
Please do update again soon, I'm dying to read more! :)
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