Okay what did he do that Minerva is about to kill him? Or at least threaten him? It's nice to see that Severus is able to torment his son in a more positive way that will hopefully continue to foster their relationship. I'm totally looking forward to reading more after that cliff hanger you left us with!
Yeah! So happy to read this! Was very awesome!
Arg! I have to stop reading right now because I have go to town... But I love this fic! It is awesome! Btw, thanks again for all of your help with Pottermore! It was "Bloody brilliant!" =)
|Title: Steps in the Right Direction
|29 Jul 2011 6:55 am
|Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
Whew, I'm relieved that Harry's all right, not to make light of it; growing pains can be horrible and for him to experience such a drastic change at once would mean severe pain. But at least it was treatable and he's better now.
I really liked the conversation between Severus and Harry. It was very real for this early stage. Both of them are still feeling their way and are unsure of each other. But the end, with Severus giving Harry the book from his grandparents, was lovely.
Another great chapter! You have written both Harry's and Severus' thoughts and emotions so well. Of course they are still stunned and uncertain. The past is between them, and both are wondering if it can be overcome. I did love the part where Severus acknowledged that he had fallen in love with his son and that he wanted to get to know him. Knowing Harry, I believe he will give Severus another chance.
But now I'm worried for him, poor kid. It's always something for him, isn't it?
Oh, what a shock for the both of them! Poor Harry and poor Severus, to have had all those years stolen from them. I can understand why Lily made her choice, but I can't help but be heart-broken for Sev and Harry. How different everything could have been.
I am glad that Severus is affected by Dumbledore's words, for DD is quite right and I know it's still not too late for them to have a wonderful and close relationship. It may be difficult at first, but Harry is extraordinarily forgiving and if Severus lets him know that he has changed, I know Harry would meet him more than halfway.
Lol that is a bit odd. I hope you update soon! This is really good and I love it.
yay! I'm so happy that remus will be returning! this chapter was well worth the wait!
Great job, looking forward to more!
|Title: On the Tip of the Tongue
|20 Jul 2011 5:59 am
|Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous)
Ouch, I guess Sirius will be heading for trouble. I hope Harry calls Severus "Dad" soon. A good story, please keep the chapters coming!