“I was trying too hard to s-survive to realize that I didn’t want to.” This line will sit with me for a long time. Truly brilliant and moving.
I’m re-reading this story and it’s absolutely amazing. Your writing is superb. Hats off to you, and hope you keep writing stories for P&S!
this is like one of the best fanfics ever written ngl
This is one of my favorite stories. It is beautifully written. I usually avoid stories that depict the most egregious forms of abuse, but this story proved an exception. The details of Harry and Severus’s actions and reactions are so well done. The story makes for a compelling read, as it unfolds with such depth and richness of experience. Their relationship, and Harry’s trust in particular, develops beautifully. I love the way you characterize scrappy, street Harry. Thank you so much for this wonderful story!
Wow, just read this whole story and I am weeping like a newborn baby! Fantasy writing!!
This is really, REALLY good! Good writing!
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