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Reviews For Finding a Father
Title: Return of the Werewolf 09 Jul 2018 11:47 am
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting coil...
    but you have a plot-hole here - though both Severus and Lupin are not very caring of a stick-thin, scared boy, surely they would not rush off to buy things 'for hours' without checking him for newly bleeding cuts, giving him a warm meal, and a change af fresh clothes? And at least speaking to him, trying to calm him down; his behaviour would make any parental figure take note...Why don't they?
    Severus, at least, is always written being highly intelligent and a master of sensing the slightest signs of danger. How about a Elf-search of his rooms for sharp objects? or a charm to alert himself when Harry tries to cut himself?
    A.Dum. wouldn't place blind obedience above keeping Harry happy, healthy and safe, would he? 'irony.'
    They are very blind guardians. All three.
Title: Between Life and Death 25 Mar 2016 8:24 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    What do you mean with mistress wolf's part?
Title: The Point of No Return 23 Mar 2016 7:42 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry is starting to heal.
Title: A New Day 05 May 2014 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my God, i didn't even know that there was such thing as FFN portal for Harry and Snape and i was really happy to find this and that your story was the first one i read!! it took me almost 24 hours to finish, i even sacrificed my sleeping time to read haha
    anyway, Finding a Father is a really good story, i love how you described the bond between Harry and Snape. You are an awesome writer! Good luck for your next writing :)
Title: A New Day 31 Oct 2011 7:07 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    i enjoyed this whole story it made me laugh and cry and get mad with the characters that i believe is the mark of a great author :)
Title: A New Day 16 Jan 2011 4:36 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww what an ending Ginny is indeed perfect for Harry
Title: Christmas at Snape Manor 16 Jan 2011 4:28 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Ginny in this I think he is one of his strengths right now
Title: When It Rains, It Pours 16 Jan 2011 4:07 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww Ginny i love that you are using her as the true friend and confidente because it is s true in some ways she would indeed understand
Title: A New Day 16 Jun 2010 12:00 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I just read this in about three days, I was hoping you would include Lily and James' sorting but alas off to read your other stories and not comment even though I really like the ;)
Title: Parental Duties 24 May 2009 7:07 pm
Reviewer: EBWelsh (Signed) [Report This]
    what?! I think that Finding a Father was either the first or second fanfiction i ever read on HPFF like ten thousand years ago but it was never completed, but I always remembered your penname and when i saw it on this site, i just had to check to see if this story was on here, and it was! Completed! I cant wait to finally finish it!

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