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Reviews For Coming Back Home
I loved the interaction between Harry and Kreacher, so sweet. Thank you for continuing your great story.
I loved the interaction between Harry and Kreacher, so sweet. Thank you for continuing your great story.
Thank you for the hopeful chapter and for sharing your thoughts. I felt that we were getting to the end of the story in this chapter, although I do want to see Molly getting Severus to stay for lunch! I think in a way it might be freeing to finish this story after the Sunday and start again with a sequel and the new ideas you want to explore. Author's Response: Thank you for another comment. I ended up deciding to do just that and finish this first part of the stories after the lunch at the Burrow. Hopefully it will be a satisfying (first) ending. Anyway, the next chapter is up now. I hope you like it too :)
Thank you a very thoughtful chapter. I'm hoping it's George in the shop. Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! And you will see heheh
Thank you for a lovely long chapter. You are so good at writing natural but clever dialogue and it was a pleasure to read it. I hope all goes well with your move and seeing your family, take care of yourself Author's Response: Thank you for your comment and your words. They mean a lot! I know I say that with every single comment but it is true. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I?m glad you liked it! All the best wishes for you too :)
That was a wonderful chapter! I absolutely love the long and thoughtful conversation between Severus and Harry. The way you wrote Severus slowly opening up to Harry is precious. It's so funny but great to see him struggling with finding the right words when he tries not be his usual snarky and sarcastic self haha. I'm glad Severus talks to Harry and reassures and supports him and says that he's going to support Harry's decision no matter what :). Oh and it's so heartwarming to see how Harry got attached to Severus. Ah, how I love this chapter. I'm sorry about your mother. Please stay safe! I wish you all well <3 Author's Response: Thank you so much for your detailed comment. I loved it! :) And writing Snape struggling to be nicer it?s really enjoyable. Sometimes it?s hard to find the right words but once I do it?s great to reread those conversations! At the end of the day, I?m grateful that people like my story, but if I keep writing it is cause I enjoy the dynamics between the characters and their evolution. And those conversations between Harry and Snape are my favorites! :D
Thank you Severus in spy mode was masterly
You manage to say so much in a natural conversations without labouring the point thank you so much Author's Response: Thank you! It?s a relief that you think so :) Sometimes I reread what I wrote and I feel like it sounds forced or doesn?t flow well. So your comment it?s a relief. Thanks again!
That's a nice chapter! And yes I loved to see Snape in spy mode haha, he was convincing :). Looking forward to read the second half of this visit to the Borgin & Burkes. Thank you and have a nice day! <3 Author's Response: Im glad you liked it! Thank you 😊 |
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