Ooh I have been loving this one. I can’t imagine there are many chapters left though, *cries*, but I am very much looking forward to Harry’s reveal to his friends. You did a great job with this. Tough tough subject matter, but I appreciate that it was never graphic and more was focused on Harry’s PTSD and recovery. Love the manner in which Harry was found. How he cling to Snape with the footsteps. Love love love that it’s McGonagall and Snape teaming up to shadow Harry everywhere and act as his protectors and confidantes. The scenes with him and Ron and Hermione are beautiful, them just being kids feels healing. I’m dying for more!
Dang. Harry's lucky. No one notices shit like that in the system. They just assume you did it to yourself. It's never a possibility that they placed you in a home like that. I never liked lockhart, so I wasn't fazed by his role in this, but it was upsetting to know it happened at Hogwarts. A few spelling/grammar errors, but who doesn't make a mistake every now and then. Over all, great story.
My heart is racing.
What a brilliant start.
So good! I so hope you continue this!
Such a powerful start! I have to say, I laughed out loud when I read
"Harry nodded slowly - he was fairly certain Snape would take great joy in sending people away in matchboxes"
Great job!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Dec 2021 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Severus is talking a great deal of sense I hope Harry follows his advice.
Thank you for updating
I love Harry’s friends being concerned for him, and running around and playing like children!
Excellent start. I love how Snape is so protective and sensitive to Harry's fears while still being clearly Snape. You've found a good balance. Really looking forward to more of this.
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