| Title: Chapter 7 Unsupervised bath
| 08 Jan 2023 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m looking forward to Snape’s conversation with Harry about what Snape saw. I really hope that you do continue your story!
| Title: Chapter 7 Unsupervised bath
| 08 Jan 2023 12:49 am
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| Reviewer: Atiruci (Signed)
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It was a really god chapter and so far a really good and interesting story. Please continue!!! I'm sososo interested what will happen next! And this deaging thing has so much potencial in it!
I also like your writing style, it's like reading a top tier book.You got some talent in you for sure :D
You got me hooked, looking forward to next chapter!
P.S. sorry for my english, it's not my first language
pps. It's my first ever review, and im glad that its for you! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means so much to me that someone likes my stories<3
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means so much to me that someone likes my stories<3
| Title: Chapter 7 Unsupervised bath
| 07 Jan 2023 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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Sii continúa, estaba esperando que actualizaras!!
| Title: Chapter 6 Harry’s first beating
| 29 Nov 2022 1:39 am
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| Reviewer: Mau (Signed)
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Me pregunto si Snape los bañara
| Title: Chapter 6 Harry’s first beating
| 14 Nov 2022 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The imagery of 3 year-olds trying to write Snape’s convoluted lines was hilarious. The subject of the chapter title was sad, though hopefully Snape used legilimency or at least suspects that not all is right with Harry. Thanks for updating!
| Title: Chapter 5 Infuriating twinkles
| 11 Nov 2022 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter. I’m intrigued to see if you are going to have their mental processes deage as well! Either way I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 5 Infuriating twinkles
| 09 Nov 2022 9:49 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Interesting times ahead for Severus! I do hope that he looks further into Harry’s injuries. This scenario seems like a good bonding experience for the three of them. Thanks for the nice update.
| Title: Chapter 5 Infuriating twinkles
| 09 Nov 2022 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Hopefully Snape will continue to observe Harry’s injuries and actually heal him. Two 3 year olds will be a challenge for him. Enjoyable chapter again
| Title: Chapter 4 Snape’s punishment
| 06 Nov 2022 6:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely cliffie! I was surprised that Severus didn’t put all the blame on Harry.
Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 3 The Party
| 06 Nov 2022 6:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh no problems ahead I think.
They seem to be in a completely muggle area, are there wards around the house? If not perhaps Sirius could find them and have a to do with Severus.
I would love to see Draco and Harry getting on and prancing Severus together.
Thank you for the story
Author's Response: Thank you for the ideas!d84;a039;
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