Title: Chapter 2 Ungrateful, arrogant, half witted Dingbat
| 06 Nov 2022 6:32 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1 A different kind of car accident
| 06 Nov 2022 6:19 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I thought the story start was excellent, very novel, and well written thank you
Brilliant! I’m so looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 1 A different kind of car accident
| 05 Nov 2022 3:28 pm
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Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed)
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Really enjoyed this first chapter. Harry’s distress was palpable. I’m looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 4 Snape’s punishment
| 05 Nov 2022 11:23 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Snape’s lecture went better than expected. I’m glad that Snape is making observations about Harry that could contradict what he thinks he knows about him. That end sentence was hilarious.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
The party scene was entertaining. Snape will undoubtedly be displeased at what he discovers. I’d love to see Snape overcome his misconceptions about Harry and learn more about his true upbringing.
Title: Chapter 2 Ungrateful, arrogant, half witted Dingbat
| 05 Nov 2022 11:09 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Uh oh, trouble indeed. I hope that Harry is careful with his nighttime wanderings. I can’t imagine Snape will be pleased.
Title: Chapter 1 A different kind of car accident
| 05 Nov 2022 11:00 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for posting on P&S! I always enjoy a classic Harry-lives-with-Snape story. I’m curious to see how all the relationship dynamics play out, and am relieved that Snape and Draco showed compassion and restraint towards Harry at the chapter’s end.
Title: Chapter 4 Snape’s punishment
| 05 Nov 2022 4:07 am
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Deaged? Turned into newts? With magic, it could be anything. Enjoyable chapter
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