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Title: The Garden of a Potion Master 02 Apr 2023 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. As a keen Gardner I love Severus’s garden and am completely intrigued as to how he leaves his garden for months at a time and comes back to find it still growing well! If I left mine it would be dead/overgrown by weeds or run riot. I suspect magic but that would confuse the neighbours.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Gardening is King! You have a good point though :) Maybe I should explain that in a later chapter. I just assumed Severus would use magic to keep his garden in a kind of stasis during his absence and that the neighbours wouldn't really care because he keeps to himself so much. But Ben actually noticed something in Chapter Four ;)
Title: The Garden of a Potion Master 02 Apr 2023 2:26 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a nice chapter. It was a nice touch adding the herbs that Severus is growing. Thanks for updating! Im looking forward to Ben and Harry meeting.

    Author's Response: Thank you! They both have to go through some things before meeting, but it's happening, promise! :)
Title: Letters, books and weathermen 01 Apr 2023 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. I hate seeing a book defaced, I will not lend one to anyone who turns down the pages to mark their place, a dreadful habit. The hobbit sentence sounds like the riddle game Bilbo played with Gollum but it’s years since I read the book.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I hate that habit too! Seriously, why? Just use a bookmark or remember the page. You're right about the riddle game. And the answer to the riddle Harry reads in the chapter is "darkness" so I thought it might fit his situation there :)
Title: The Garden of a Potion Master 01 Apr 2023 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    Estoy deseando ver el momento en el que Ben y Harry se conocerán, Muchas gracias por la actualización de la historia y sigue pronto!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I've decided to update every friday, so you'll have to be a little patient with me :) Also, Ben and Harry will meet in the not too far away future, promise :D
Title: Day off 01 Apr 2023 6:25 am
Reviewer: Creative-and-Curious (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like your story to this point. Glad to see it updated so I can continue reading. Lots of love!

    Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm happy you like the story!
Title: Letters, books and weathermen 31 Mar 2023 4:29 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The chapter end was lovely. The destruction of the book made me shudder too. Thanks for updating. I’m looking forward to reading on!

    Author's Response: I could never destroy a book. The other day I accidentally bent a page. Ugh! New chapter is on its way!
Title: Day off 31 Mar 2023 4:18 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter! I loved seeing this side of Snape and how he got there. Great stuff.

    Author's Response: I thought it impossible for Snape and Harry to ever have a chance at a good relationship with Snape's background in canon. So I made a few *cough* changes :D
Title: Survival Training 31 Mar 2023 4:14 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m intrigued by Ben! I like his backstory.

    Author's Response: There's more to come, promise!
Title: Welcome Home Mr. Snape 31 Mar 2023 4:02 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I liked end. The dialogue felt realistic.
Title: Day off 31 Mar 2023 12:05 am
Reviewer: Mau (Signed) [Report This]
    Me agrada Ben muy bien comienzo

    Author's Response: Yes, he's growing on me as well :)

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