I’m feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.
Wonderful.
This a truly wonderful story! You did an excellent job! There was only one thing that puzzled me, and that was Harry’s obvious familiarity with the Burrow and Arthur Weasley’s familiarity with Harry! It puzzled me because I was under the impression this was set at the end of Harry’s first year and so Harry wouldn’t have ever been to the Burrow or been around Arthur except hearing about it and him through Ron and the other Weasley kids! It in no way distracted from the story, I assure you, and I enjoyed Arthur and Severus’ interactions very much! You should definitely continue with this as a series or a sequel!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 May 2023 8:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending to the story thank you
| Title: Desperate Departure
| 30 May 2023 5:42 pm
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Harry’s invisibility cloak was not mentioned with his belongings, he should have used it! Wonderful description of the chase in the air, very exciting. Thank you so much
This chapter was totally beautiful. Although I never like a good story to end, this did feel like the fitting place to do so. Thanks so much for sharing.
This is an excellent story. Having Severus Snape, pursue Harry, the way, he did, was both inspirational and absolutely terrifying. I also loved how the truth slowly dawned on Severus that there was more to Harry’s actions of fleeing, instead of stubbornly, holding onto his pre-conceived notion’s that he was just acting out as a spoiled brat. You did an incredible job and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
I loved this! Harry’s despair and fear are palpable, and it’s touching when Snape responds. I’m so looking forward to the follow on chapter. Thanks so much for posting!
| Title: Desperate Departure
| 19 May 2023 10:49 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awwww, I love this! The broom chase and such was so dramatic, and how Harry fell and broke hia ankle... Harry was determined to get away, but Snape's determination to catch him won.
So are all the students home or on the train now? It said Hogwarts was quiet. Harry's friends must be worried sick. What does Dumbledore think? Will he still try to force Harry to return to the Dursleys?
Thanks for writing and sharing this story. I really love it so far. Please update when you can.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed!
It's the middle of the night when they arrive. Sorry, I think a paragraph got removed when I was editing... now to remember what it was...
For everything else I guess you'll have to find out in the next chapter ;)
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