Awww, this was a great ending! I'm so glad that Snape was able to get Harry out of the delusion dream that he was trapped in. It was so interesting seeing a kind version of the Dursleys.

It's always cool to have Voldemort do some kind of advanced magic as well. Being a strong mind magic user, it makes sense that he could trap Harry in such an advanced spell. Very cool idea.

Here are a couple of typos I noticed:

“This is not real,” the man said softly. “Your family. Their affection for you is not as familiar as is should be, is it?”

as it should be


...back on his hands and looking around the neighbourhood. A little wind blew by, rusting the leaves

rustling

Snape, catching on to the face

fact

He finally pulled out one of the chairs around the kitchen table and sat, hating how weak you felt.

he felt.

Snape snorted. “Teenagers.” The then turned to go

He then

Thanks so much for writing and posting it! I really enjoyed reading this unique and interesting story again. Well done!