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Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 8:47 pm
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant last two chapters. I loved them and the use and description of Harrys Occlumency shields was ingenious. Well done, can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Perry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the interaction between Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks:-)  Snape and Harry interaction won't be happening until chapter six, next chapter, Snape will only be mentioned.

     

Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 1:43 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I've been awake all night with insomnia and started reading your story, hoping to put myself to sleep-- DIDN'T WORK! I'm WIDE awake after four chapters! Fascinating take on Harry's character, and especially how he learned to form his Occlumency shields. Also, I like the understanding he has attained for Snape. Can't wait to see where you ultimately take the story! :-) // Just a note: I've seen repeated use of "safe", meaning "except" (ex. "During torture sessions he had always felt the Death Eaters morbid pleasure safe for two people.")-- the correct word in this context is "save". I really admire you for being able to write such a terrific story in English! Way to go!

    Author's Response:

    Somehow I'm glad it didn't put you to sleep, but on the other hand I'm sorry my story couldn't help ;-)

    Thanks for the correction and for reviewing.

Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 12:29 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    "It wasn't dangerous, but looking into those emerald eyes was like looking into the eyes of a very old and wise man making her feel like a child. The only other person who had that effect on her was Albus." - hmm, then you are making Harry like some old and very experienced guy... Well, it may sound interesting, but remember that he's also a child and he isn't always so "old" :D

    Good luck :)

    Author's Response: Now that you're mentioning it... Not the best phrasing, I think... Thanks for pointing it out and thanks for the review :-)
Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 12:29 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    "It wasn't dangerous, but looking into those emerald eyes was like looking into the eyes of a very old and wise man making her feel like a child. The only other person who had that effect on her was Albus." - hmm, then you are making Harry like some old and very experienced guy... Well, it may sound interesting, but remember that he's also a child and he isn't always so "old" :D

    Good luck :)

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