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Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 04 Mar 2011 11:18 pm
Reviewer: WanderLust (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have enjoyed your work on this fiction immensely thus far. Your writing style is engaging and you have parsed the emotional tensions of these characters beautifully. Additionally, the specificity and build of your plot line is carefully determined and executed. I do have one small note on word usage; you frequently use the word 'deduct' when I believe you mean to use 'deduce' (i.e. you deduce meaning, you deduct points). Also, you have emphasized the considerable strain on your protagonist but we have yet to see any consequence. Am I right to think that this will be entering the story soon?
Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 03 Feb 2011 4:40 am
Reviewer: Envision (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am really loving this story! Thank you so much for sharing it!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and you're welcome :)
Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 01 Feb 2011 9:01 am
Reviewer: abby1000 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this for the most part. This chapter had quite a few mis-spelled words though.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry about that. I'm not a native speaker, so I have a beta helping me. Mistakes still happen, though.
Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 01 Feb 2011 1:16 am
Reviewer: zalievana (Signed) [Report This]
    well what can i say? a wonderful chapter of a wonderful story and i cant wait for an update... i like that - despite the story leading to Snape becoming a guardian to Harry it is not cliche in the slightest...i wonder (even though i am unsure whether i really want to know) how long do you plan the story to be... i mean...on one hand the (admitedly short) waiting between chapters is killing me...on the other hand i just wish the story would go on and on and on because its simply good reading...10 points from me:)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

    As for your question... Had you asked me that question about a month ago, I would have said that it'll be thirty-eight chapters (the splitted ones respectively counting as one chapter), but a subplot came to mind that has already caused me to write an additional chapter, so it'll be longer.... I can't tell you how many words there will be, but chapter-wise we haven't hit half yet.

    Thanks again for reviewing.

Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 01 Feb 2011 12:48 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Not to sound like a broken record or anything (and maybe it's fitting as it really is just 1 long chapter)

    :-)

    thanks again for sharing
    V.

    Author's Response: And I thank for reviewing yet again :)
Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 31 Jan 2011 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this was certainly interesting. And Long...did I mention long? Wow, over 12k words. I consider it a good task if I can make over 2k in my chapters! You are very likely to become one of the stories with the longest word count if you continue the way you have been. Not that that's a bad thing; actually, it's quite a good thing. And I am rambling, aren't I? Kudos on an awesome job. I am really loving this story.

    Author's Response: Thanks :) If it's any comfort to you, I never meant any chapter to be as long...

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