Title: Survivor
| 17 May 2014 3:07 am
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Reviewer: a reader (Anonymous)
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Wow, that was intense, and hilarious!What a schock and relief for Sev and Dumbledore... I am so glad that Harry is alive! It would have crossed Sev's heart, had Harry died, I am so glad that he decided to come back for "professor Snape". You have a very interesting writing style, especially in your portrayal of Snape, a slightly ironic humor..in the midst of all the drama...I also love your emotional Dumbledore in this chapter, I am glad that you made him human, and not the manipulative, cold and sometimes evil man he is in some fics, love his reunion with Harry... Very interesting twist to the horcrux idea from canon, and here it was Harry who was possessed, not Quirell, but now he is free! Brillant plot!
Love how you've woven it all together.
Title: Survivor
| 15 Jul 2011 12:20 am
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Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous)
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I soooo loved Snape's response when Harry woke up. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad it didn't come across as unemotional. Snape doesn't show his feelings, and I think that's an ingrained response with him, but he was nevertheless deeply shocked. I'm so glad you liked it, thank you!
Yea! Harry is alive. Sev needs to work on his self esteem though (I mean that as a compliment to you. In reality, it is very likely Sev, even in the books, has a low opinion about himself as a person due to his father's abuse).
His devotion... you also captured that beautifully! No wonder Harry is lucky to have him.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I agree, for all his outward confidence, Snape has a rather low opinion of himself... I'm glad I managed to get that across! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Survivor
| 12 Jul 2011 12:55 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love Harry's slip about his rival house great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit that I agree with Snape - Dumbledore deserved Harry's answer after his remark on "Gryffindor traits" ;).... thank you very much for reviewing!
i love you. i love severus. i love harry. i love albus. i love this story, and the brain that thought it up. you are incredible. thank you so much. i'll go to bed now.
Author's Response: I love your review :) - thank you very much for the kind feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Title: Survivor
| 10 Jul 2011 8:11 pm
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Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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lovely...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oooooooh, what an amazing chapter! I really, really loved this! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Survivor
| 10 Jul 2011 3:19 am
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Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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great story, i love the details about the magic world and the beginning of a potions apprenticeship, you really create a credible magical realm that is quite enjoyable, and I like your depiction of Snape as well. I hope you continue the story!
Author's Response: Good guess there :)! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thank you for letting me know!
Holy crap that was awesome. You are doing an amazing job with this fic. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
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