This is my first time reading this series, but so far, I think it's pretty good.
Poor Severus! It's a terrible thing to feel so alone and depressed that you would wish to end it all. This is a powerful piece of work and is making me cry! Great job.
Omg. Poor Severus.
How awful. I'm worried that Severus is going to find out that Harry invaded his privacy and be really angry.
Good start Snapegirl.
I like the POV change. I've always been curious as to why the memories are viewed the way they are. So how is Sev going to react to Harry's unintentional memory-gazing? Hopefully better than what happened in OotP. Great job, please write more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've posted more and you'll see Sev's reaction at the end of the story.
Sev is going to be royally ticked off when he finds Harry in his Pensive. I don't approve of suicide either, but I do think it needs to be addressed more so that people, children especially, understand what they are doing when they end it. How utterly selfish they are, even when they think that no one cares, because there is someone, somewhere, who will care, even if a person hasn't met them yet. I only feel that the ones who willingly hurt others, and revel in it, should have their lives cut short. Kudos on a great first chapter, and you've got me rambling again :P.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just posted more of this, so now you can see how Hagrid and Sev are getting along.
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