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Title: Mystic Alley 03 Dec 2010 2:31 am
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed) [Report This]
    Surrey is a County. I do not know why so many (oh no, you are certainly not the only one) seem to take for granted that Surrey is just a village or a small town. “Little Whinging” is supposed to be the town. Saying to the cab driver that you want to get to “Privet Drive in Surrey” could have him driving around ALL of the towns and villages – and there are quite a few of them.

    It is also one of the Home Counties. Which County is regarded as a Home County depends on just when you are placing the story, but as far as I can recall, Surrey has always been one of the Home Counties (which is believed to have started with the itinerant assizes court, i.e. the travelling judges)

    Now, that is a minor criticism. You have a very good story here, and I am definitely enjoying it very much, and hope you will continue. It seems that your last update was in 2007 and I hope this is due only to a writer¨s block and nothing worse. The story is definitely too good to abandon.
Title: Mystic Alley 11 Aug 2006 4:51 am
Reviewer: SAMANTHAKITTY (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I THOUGHT THE STORY WAS ALREADY FINISHED, SO I PRINTED IT UP. NOW I AM HOOKED.  I HOPE YOUR CLASSES FINISHED UP WELL AND YOU CAN NOW DEVOTE MORE TIME TO POSTING CHAPTERS!  BY THE WAY, YOU HAVE THE MOST PLAUSIBLE EXPLANATION I HAVE EVER COME ACROSS FOR HOW SEVERUS BECAME HARRYS' FATHER.  I RALLY DISLIKE STORIES WHERE THE AUTHOR MAKES IT SEEM LIKE LILY HELD HER NOSE AND DID THE DEED OUT OF ANGER AT JAMES, BECAUSE SHE WAS BLIND DRUNK, OR SIMPLE HORNEY DESPERATION.  THANK YOU FOR A CHARACTER WHO IS BELIEVABLE IN BOTH HIS YOUTH AND HIS PAIN.  I HOPE HE ENDS UP WITH SOME PEACE  AND HAPPINESS IN HIS LIFE, IN BOTH YOUR STOREY AND J.K. ROWLINGS.

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTERS.

Title: Mystic Alley 05 Jul 2006 12:12 am
Reviewer: snape126 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I loved this chapter!  When are you going to update?  I hope soon!  this fic is really well written!  Hope to see you have updated soon! 
    Your avid reader~

    Snape126

Title: Mystic Alley 08 Jun 2006 7:45 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh please update soon!  I love this chapter!  Excellent on the Mystic Alley, Corrinne seems Welsh or Irish.  And please have Sev at least tolerate Harry.  Or you could just kill Harry off.... Suicide note and everything :P  Either way would really be fine, just make it good and angsty on Snapey. 

     RR~ Shadow

Title: Mystic Alley 01 Jun 2006 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Fan_Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Very detailed, very wel written! I really liked your characterisation of young Severus, and I can't wait until he finds out the truth! Very intriguing character, Corine is, I'm assuming she'll make a re-appearance?

    So, that leaves one more reader waiting with breatless anticipation for an update! :)



    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I'm glad you like the details. Many of them will come back later. I'm also glad you like young Severus.

    As for Corinne, you'll have to wait and see...

    Now that I'm done with college, I'm working on the next update so it should be soon.

    Val

Title: Mystic Alley 20 May 2006 9:33 am
Reviewer: Gabby Kathleen (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Update soon please!! I love this story!!  

Title: Mystic Alley 15 Apr 2006 5:31 pm
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]

    Great chapter, and I've really enjoyed your story so far. I usually don't like OCs, but Corinne Morgana is interesting. Just take care not to make her infallible and perfect,  please - it's not nearly as interesting. I like Mystic Alley - very creative. Please update again soon!

Title: Mystic Alley 02 Apr 2006 6:49 am
Reviewer: Raye (Angelis_raye_kamura@Yahoo.com) (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Please, do update this! It's one of the best that I've read in quite a long time.  Much more detailed and realistic, I believe. Many severitus challenge fanfictions just portray Severus as an evil bastard or this very happy and exeited father.  Whereas you portray him in a cross between the two, exacting a more real feel to it.

    I hope you don't have any problems with the next chapter!  Good luck!


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