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Reviews For Surprise!
I appreciated McGonagall’s concern in this chapter! I admit to being a little frustrated with Harry’s generosity in his description of his treatment from Snape. But then again – How could Harry know any better? He only has the Dursely’s to compare to. In the books - they kept him in a cupboard for 10 years – then put multiple locks and bars up in a bedroom and fed him a can of soup a day (which he shared with his owl) through a cat flap. So in Harry’s mind - the fact that he mostly gets regular meals and isn’t hit would seem pretty good. The emotional abuse, lack of trust, and dislike are a normal expectation for him. But I can’t help being unsatisfied with the idea of Snape being let off the hook so easily. He has shown so little kindness. I am thinking there would be several witches/wizards who would be willing to give Harry a real home if they understood his situation. Thank heavens for Hogwarts – every child needs to feel they wanted and belong somewhere. You are doing a great job with the angst in this story (as frustrating as it is at times.) I am eager for more. Thank you for writing and sharing.
me gustan los detalles, y aprecio en verdad la actitud de McGanigall, es sin duda muy bien pensada, fascinante capítulo el que has descrito aquí, varias cosas que apreciar en el cuadro general, si mi memoria no me falla (ya que no quiero revisar el libro) el siguiente incidente interesante debe ser la clase contra el boggart, espero con interes tu actualización
Loving this story and I'm glad Ian is in Ravenclaw! Author's Response: I didn't write a scene where Snape gave Harry the broom back, just tried to kind of hint that he did. And as you might have noticed in this chapter, I did say that Snape had in fact given it back to Harry. Harry talking to McGonagall was in the classroom, Snape was standing in the corridor outside. At least that how I immagined it, though it would be up to each reader personally to picture it as they please. More on that in the next chapter. Also, *fangirlsquek!* I love your stories! |
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