This is my first time on this website so idk if
there’s other reviews or I just can’t see them but
I rly like this fic the characters feel rly canon and
I like how you spaced the mini paragraphs as it’s
Easier to read. Kudos!! :)
The tension leading up to this chapter was perfect, and made reading it very cathartic in a strange way. I like how, by having to polyjuice Harry, Snape had to actually think about his actions and gained some empathy/insight that way. The only thing that could make it better would be to actually see the result of Snape's hard-earned evidence gathering by either getting to see her hauled out of Hogwarts or by getting to see the trial. Thanks for the story, waitingondaisies!
I like the small but important, shared, detail of his heart aching and being soothed simultaneously by being tucked in. I like how this all makes it very easily to, literally, walk a mile in Harry's shoes. This is all very good.
So Severus will have "I must not tell lies" scarred on his hands from now on. The things he does for the Light. I hope Lily, where ever she is, appreciates it. At least now they have the evidence.
Author's Response: he sure will, but at least he knew what the consequences would be going in and decided that the cost was worth it– to save harry, and all the rest of them, really, from umbitch
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| 18 Feb 2020 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent description of the detention and you are so good at writing Umbridge thank you
Author's Response: thank you!!! and i hate writing her, so it's good to hear that I can do it well :D
Just found this story and am really enjoying it. Nicely written. Interesting premise. Thanks!
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing and you're very welcome <3
Great chapter.
Author's Response: thank you!
Glad to see Umbridge will be arrested and Snape is realizing what Harry has gone through.
Author's Response: im really glad you liked it! thank you for the review!!
very glad for Umbitc* to getting hers!
Author's Response: haha big mood!!
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