| Title: 3: The Journal
| 17 Mar 2017 2:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a great chapter and very clever thank you
Very interesting and actually quite believable premise. I like your portrayal of James and I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this.
Omg! James! What "have" you done?
How is the paternity test now going to prove that Severus is Harry's father, and not James, if James did something to warp the test's results?
The journal is the only proof. I wonder who gave Harry the journal then, if Remus had decided not to.
Darned you! This story is so good, that I'm reading this instead of writing my own. Yours is better.
My, my... Either James was rather desperate or he was a few pawns short of a chess board, it would seem. Perhaps both? Pureblood inbreeding, maybe?
Very interesting development - a twist I've yet to see, anyhow. Well done!
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