Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 12 Jan 2011 3:37 am
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Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Good story. I'm not sure how I feel about Niamh. She seems like a slice of Hermione placed in Slytherin just so Harry would have a friend. I noticed that you made up some Slytherins in Harry's year instead of keeping real Slytherins such as Tracey Davis and Theodore Nott. I like Jardin. Will Harry get rid of that accent after being around his friends for the next few years? I can't wait until Harry finds out that he is Snape's son.
A rather nicely-done retelling - I like it. Can't wait to see what you've done in later tales.
Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 17 Aug 2009 9:37 pm
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Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Well, that was intresting to say the least. Vernon is totally hen-pecked, eh? Nice story, if a bit short.
Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 17 Aug 2007 5:19 pm
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Reviewer: Rachlan (Anonymous)
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Excellent beginning! Can't wait to see what happens next! I like how you stuck to the books and yet changed things around. Very good!
Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 09 Aug 2007 4:24 pm
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Reviewer: honore (Anonymous)
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Very nicely done, though how come he had to go back to the Dursely's? I don't think I am very fond of Dumbldore here. Apparently he can't find a clue. Going to read the next bit now. You write very well. Looking forward to more. Thanks
That was a great story, so great in fact that I am actually going to start reading the next in the series now despite the fact that it is now 11:33 and I have not slept since the day before yesterday. Damn these addicting fanfictions.
Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 25 Feb 2007 1:54 am
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Reviewer: aorli (Anonymous)
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what a gem! i love your version of things; it's exactly what i'd expect had things happened the way you set them. bravo!
Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 20 Feb 2007 4:49 am
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Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Fabulous!! I think I started this before. The updates took us through the first year and it was very interesting. Harry seems much older and wiser than the others. You have a great ability to narrow the scenes down to the most important points and make the story seem more like flashes of action. I can't believe that they put Harry in the broom cubbord. Please tell us that Snape will save his son?
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