Poor Harry. That sounded painful.
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| 01 May 2009 4:56 pm
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| Reviewer: AN ITALIAN READER - CHIARA (Anonymous)
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OMG !!! SNAPE IS VERY STERN BUT IN SOMEHOW I THINK THAT HE FEEL HIMSELF LIKE A DISGUSTING MAN IN DOING IT ,ALSO IF THE BOY IS HARRY => JAMES POTTER'S SON . BY THE END I THINK THAT THIS STORY IS A GOOD STORY AND I HOPE THAT THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL CHANGE A IN A VERY FRIENDLY MODE ! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE TO WRITE .
ps:I'M ITALIAN AND NOT VERY GOOD IN ENGLISH WRITING BUT I HOPE THAT I MADE MY SELF CLEAR :-) LOVE CHIARA
Ooh, I could almost feel Harry's pain. Poor kid.
Oooh, shivers down my spine. I'm amazed DD allowed this! 10 is so harsh; shame on you Sev!
Nice work though, and well written!
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| 19 Oct 2008 6:57 am
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| Reviewer: terumi (Anonymous)
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unexpected..................
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| 05 Oct 2008 4:51 am
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| Reviewer: Kella (Anonymous)
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OUCH, that was harsh,...cane!? poor kid, I'm glad you wrote this realistically, because, we all know Harry would not start sobbing with the first hit, it worked out quite well, even snape's sympathy did not seem out of place.
Great work
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I am glad you liked it. Yes, I tried to write this realistically, though luckily I do not have any first-hand experience.
Ouch, 10 strokes! I cant take more than 8, least Harry got to keep his bum covered. Still a good fic though, well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. It sounds as though you have experienced a caning yourself, you have my sympathies! Luckily I never have but I have heard it hurts A LOT!
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