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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Amazing Chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it that much. Thank you for your review!
Update soon, please, I want to read about them getting better :) Mila Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
The gross imagery of the suffering, Harry and Draco's, may set back from the story, since [I'm] keen to avoid any such descriptions altogether. Draco's letter was a bit out of place - men, boys included, do not relate their 'feelings' in such terms. If they're cold, they would tell you in round-about terms that "you should buy a winter-coat, it's freezing" and the like. Otherwise, it's a hundred percent true. Very disturbing, actually, and if it weren't for [my] belief in the fact that you''ll stay true to the [happy] ending of your other stories, I wouldn't probably be reading this. However, your thorough understanding of the victims of violence, of any kind, is what makes this story full of heart-breaking moments, yet full of hope and the promise of recuperation. Nine frogs! Thank you! Author's Response: You may be right that boys normally aren't that open to speak about their emotions, but Draco had several therapy sessions after the events in the dungeons (it was mentioned in one of this first chapters). Even boys learn while therapy that it is important to open up to a few special persons. :) I'm glad you still like the story. Thank you for your review!
Nice chapter as usual. I love how you put the horses in this story. Author's Response: You will learn more about Severus' thoughts in the next chapters! The whole story is about Harry realizing that there is more than hate and revenge. Thank you very much for your review! |
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