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Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 18 Oct 2009 4:23 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry seems a little to...comfortable around Light Arrow. He seems to trust the man a lot and they only just met. I expected his reaction to be more like Severus.

    Snape's actions seem very realistic. He puts distance between himself and White Cloud. Yet after he does something 'stupid' he reacts to her on instinct, following her instructions almost without thought.

    I loved the scene between Severus and White Cloud and hope to see more soon.

    Amazing Chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Harry is quiet at the edge and inwardly he wishs for someone to help him and confort him. That's the reason why he is opening up to Light Arrow so soon. It should have taken maybe a wekk to make it look real but I write my story mostly to handle the stress from my work. Writing this stuff balance me out. Therefore it is soemtimes a bit extrem and unrealistic.

     

Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 11 Aug 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: Jeido95 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus :( I love how you portray him as being so concerned for the boys, and even to go as to make Severus Snape lose control, it is good to have a guardian!Snape where he doesn't have perfect control on himself and his emotions, and where he actually has someone else to trust. Can't wait for your next chapter, keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 11 Aug 2009 12:38 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this was so sad, and so heartbreaking. I think that some progress is finally being made though. I really hope that Harry changes his mind about this revenge plan.

    He's going to ruin his life and make others so sad. Light Arrow handled it really well.

    Powerful chapter as usual.

    Author's Response: Just trust them to help him. ;)
    Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 11 Aug 2009 12:25 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Serious heavy-duty angst here, as expected, of course! Wow. Fantastic chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 10 Aug 2009 12:00 am
Reviewer: Cammy (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev!!! Who would have thought that he is in such a bad shape. I hope they will be able to help him, too.
    Great chapter. Looking forward to the next update!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 09 Aug 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter. Please continue on - looking for more updates.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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