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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 16 Mar 2010 8:42 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    While I'm aware that the twins are a lot younger than Harry, sometimes I think that Severus and Ivy expect him to be more mature than is normal for a thirteen year old. His anger at the behavior of the twins was normal as was how he acted. Ivy shouldn't have forced the boys to all wear ties...or should have used clip ons instead of real ones. Due to Harry's description of how it felt, I think that the ties were on too tight, so perhaps they should have been allowed to loosen them.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, sometimes parents are not nice and reasonable! They are human! :)

     Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 16 Mar 2010 12:08 am
Reviewer: ArcticSeasons (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. I enjoyed the ceremony very much.

    We finally get the first fight between the boys. I was amused by how Eathan tried getting Harry in trouble. I wasn't to pleased that Harry yelled at Ly for just pointing out the truth. Ah, but that's the joys of having sibblings that I never got to experience since I'm an only child.

    I liked how Severus and Ivy dealt with the boys and resovled the situation between them. I'm glad that Harry and Eathan said sorry to each other and that Harry said sorry to Ly.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Bye!

    Author's Response:

    It was time they got a row. My borther always complained about how stupid and annoying I was. I remember many times I got him in trouble very badly. 

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 1:53 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry :) discovering downsides of having a family :)

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 1:29 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah. . . the joy of little brothers!

    I enjoyed the chapter!
    V.

    Author's Response: Yeah! *evilgrin* Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 9:47 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a quick post, and a great chapter. OK, harry is definitely part of the family, it's so natural now. Love the story. Post soon please.

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 6:01 am
Reviewer: b (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't wait for the next chapter. I absolutly love this story.

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 5:59 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I was glad to see Ly and Eathan acting like younger brothers who get cranky and try to get their older brother in trouble. I am glad that Harry was able to use his applicator in time. Thanks so much for the update!

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 5:34 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so beautiful N. Forest and you too grugster.

    Great chapter, and I really loved the ceremony. Great work.

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 15 Mar 2010 5:30 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

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