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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 43 13 Nov 2007 8:48 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. absolutely fantastic story. You are such a talented writer. I am going to read more of your stories now, though this is not the first one I have read. I am very excited for the sequel, and do hope that draco is included. i love harry/draco, and while it would be ever so difficult in this universe, i think you could actually handle it and write it well. i will love it though, whatever you do. keep up the great work!
Title: Chapter 34 11 Nov 2007 7:53 pm
Reviewer: Diego (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is so well written! If not for all the copy rights and such rot, you could really publish this!

    (have you ever noticed how D-o-g father is coincidently G-o-d father backwards *is hit for stupidity*)
Title: Chapter 43 11 Nov 2007 7:17 am
Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was really good. :) The Draco thing was interesting, too.

    I think there should be more Remus interaction!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 9:27 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great story, I don't really like reading things envolving rape, bbut everyone said this was such a great story, that I totally caved. I'm glad there was nothing graphic, it made it more tolerable. I realy liked reading this though, it was very good. It was emotional, excieting, funny, creative, nice and long, and I hope to see the sequel soon ^_^

    Author's Response: Thanks, snarky!  The scenes involving rape were some of the ahrdest I've ever had to write, and I tried hard not to make it graphic, but deal with the traumatic aftermath anyway.  The sequel is still in the "searching for a title" phase, but I hope to get a real start on it in a week or two.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 11:35 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Great end to this porton of your story. Snape and Harry are both so good for each other. I'm not too sure how I feel about Draco's ?peace offering? really. Harry can be too forgiving sometimes, but I guess he's right in admitting that Draco isn't his father. He's a total prat, but relatively harmlessly in comparison to Lucius Malfoy.

    I can't wait for the sequel. Well, I guess I can wait, but it will definitely be an impatient wait (lol). Thanks so much for sharing...

    Author's Response:

    Hi curlybean,  Thanks for the review!  You're right; Harry is too forgiving, but it's his nature, and Draco isn't his father . . . he will be a significant character in the sequel, though, so we'll get to see more of his non-Luciusness in play. I should have the first chapter to the sequel out in a week or two.

Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 7:58 am
Reviewer: owlsaway (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great story. I've been reading all along but been negligent about reviewing. I think this one is my favorite of all your stories. WELL DONE!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad I finished it, as it's definitely been the hardest of my stories to write.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 12:15 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I truly enjoyed reading this story and while I am sorry to see it finished I can't wait to read the sequel. In fact I am going to wait a couple of days and reread this story from start to finish in preparation for the sequel.

    Author's Response: Cool, thanks!  I actually had to reread the whole thing recently, because I was sure I'd forgotten some threads somewhere that needed to be tied off . . .
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 6:25 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! Yaaay!! I'm so glad that Draco's not a complete @ss like his father and that Harry is trying to see beyond his hatred of Lucius and give Draco a second chance!! I just hope it doesn't turn out to be a trick - Harry is so cautious, especially after his kidnapping, that it would be devastating to have his tentative overtures to Draco come back to bite him!!
    This was a fantastic story and I've really really enjoyed it (well, not the torture so much!) and I'm very much looking forward to seeing how Harry gets along this year - I love the solution Severus has come up with for Harry, and I'm wondering how long Harry will be needing to use it for, and if he can ever get back to attending classes as usual!!
    Thank you again for sharing this great story with us!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response:

    Hi Scarlett,  Thanks for the review!  Many of your questions (okay, all of them) will be answered in the sequel, which will prominently figure Draco, in all his, uh, glory, and the further ramifications of Snape's leaving the DEs, as well as more healing for Harry, and how he deals with his friends now.  I should have the first chapter to the sequel out in a week or two, though I'm still in search of a title . . .  :-)

Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 4:33 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent ending! It's good to see that Draco was disgusted by his fathers actions. I'm still worried about how the other children of DE's will act towards Harry. I don't think he'll be able to get away with hexing them everytime they say something horrible. Outstanding story and I am eagerly awaiting the sequel!!

    Author's Response: Hi Alexis,  Thanks for the review!  Draco (and the ramifications of his choices in response to his father's actions) will figure prominently in the sequel.  And so will the responses of the other DE children to Snape's perceived defection.  There are trying times ahead!
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 3:33 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I can't believe it's over. You've moved through some of your stories so fast... and yet they're so long, lol. I absolutely adore this one in particular. It ranks right up there with a lot of other extremely well-written Severitus/Sevitus stories.

    Draco sure came to the right realization... and it took for a while, lol. I'm surprised Harry thanked him so quickly, but I like it. Shows how quick he is to be grateful, or at least pretend like he is, whichever it turns out to be, lol.

    Though, I will undoubtably be sad that this particular era has come to an end, I cannot WAIT for the sequel :D

    Author's Response:

    Hi Caramello,  Thanks for the review!  I, too, am amazed I finished this one . . . it was definitely the hardest of my stories to tackle.  You're right; Harry did thank Draco awfully quickly . . . but then, as has been pointed out, he is generally very quick to forgive, and he doesn't hold a grudge like some Snapes I might mention.  ;-)

    I should have the first chapter to the sequel out in a week or two, so no worries.


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