| Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before
| 05 Mar 2009 7:51 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Yay! Fabulous!! Awesome chapter. I adored the bonding moment between Harry and Snape. Very well done. I especially liked your description of how Harry felt normal, but special all at once by sharing these experiences, and how Snape spoke to him like an equal. Precious. Thank you so much for updating and sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. They mean a lot to me!
Cute! Great chapter! Poor Harry and the bathroom. LOL! I'm glad that the House elf came to his rescue.
Author's Response: It seems many readers really hate the bathroom and Paul. :( Thanks for your review! I thought you had given up reading my story and now am glad that I was wrong!
I wonder who were Albus's visitors. He must have kicked them out of his office pretty swiftly *giggles*
Author's Response: I haven't thought about this. So you can imagine whom ever you want. For the story it doesn't matter because I only needed Albus not to come too quickly. :) But yes, you are right, he must have kicked them out very swiftly. :D
| Title: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione
| 04 Mar 2009 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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love this chapter. I think Harry was scared because another parent or someone he could trust was leaving him.
Author's Response: Yes, you are right. He couldn't know that it was normal that Severus looks and feels so bad because Severus had looked so 'fine' in the morning.
| Title: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione
| 04 Mar 2009 3:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Woah! You had me scared there; for both Harry AND Severus. I do hope that Sev is going to be ok!!
Poor Harry, he really had a panic attack didn't he? He really cares about Sev, doesn't he?
I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Yes, he is going to be okay. Yes, Harry had a panic attack because he didn't knew that Severus was that ill. So he was shocked to Sev looking so sick. Thank you for your review!
Its good to see a different side of Severus...sick and feverish xxx
Please add another chapter soon
10/10
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 19 - Decorating
| 28 Feb 2009 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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I think the chapter went well. I think that every chapter doesn't have to have Harry and Severus. I like IVY and I am glad that they are taking Harry Shopping. Can you add the kids when you go. They are to cute.
Author's Response: At the shopping for Harry they would be too distracting, but Albus will go shopping with Harry and the twins at the weekend. They will have a lot of fun.
| Title: Chapter 19 - Decorating
| 27 Feb 2009 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I'm so glad that Harry got to decorate his room nicely and that he's going to get nice clothes. Poor Harry, he's so nervous around Severus, isn't he?
Author's Response: Harry is nervous around everyone even his friends at the moment! Thanks for your review!
| Title: Chapter 19 - Decorating
| 27 Feb 2009 5:35 am
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| Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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hey nice chapter :) no worries on not including more of sev in this chapter. though ivy seems a little overly concerned.. is sev really alright..? update soon ya.. :)
Author's Response: Yes, Severus is not dangerously ill. You will see in the next chapter what's wrong. Ivy is a very emotional witch and so you shouldn't take her worries too serious! :) Thanks for your review!
hi, i love your story, and i just wanted to say, yes this is very much a severus and harry site, however, it's not really possible to always have them in one chapter. that's okay, it's not required for every chapter to have snape and harry
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
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