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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 19 Dec 2009 2:28 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Such a great chapter. I like how you've developed Augustus, showing him as both old fashioned and yet fiercely loyal and missing his wife and daughters. Well done! I also liked the whole cookie baking thing, it was sweet! No pun intended!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like Augustus and baking, since I really love baking!
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 18 Dec 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter--good introduction to Augustus. But the timeline where Augustus talks abouta why he's unafraid to say Voldemort's name seems a little off. He says, "Bah! He is naught but another dark wizard, like Asmodean in my grandfather’s time, and Grindelwald before him." Shouldn't he rather have said "...and Grindelwald more recently since." If Grindelwald happened during the 1940's, then that was not "before {Asmodean}" but after. Minor quibble--other than that, wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response:

    You're right, I meant to go fix that, since it's and awkward sentence. Thanks for reminding me.

    Hope you enjoy my most recent chapter! Thanks for reading!

Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 8:39 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww... cute chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Next one is up!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 7:53 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story, it fits in perfect with the holiday season. Sometimes it would be nice to wish you can start over and have someone there for you. Snape brought harry to Augustus and started a new life, a little old and a little new. Can't wait to read next chapter.

    Author's Response: You're right. It's good to start over sometimes.  And now they both have a chance to do that and make Augustus' aging years anything but boring. LOL!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 7:12 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the cookies!!! Yummmm. I loved this chapter! So full of hope that the Christmas season brings every year. Augustus is just now learning that he is now not lone, he does have family and I like that he wants them so badly in his life for whatever time he has left. I remember my twins at Harry's age....everything, everyday a new adventure.....just wish they stayed that way a little longer....thank you for an other wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: You're right. Augustus is just now learning an important lesson and SEverus will have many more lessons with Harry and fun too as he grows up!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I loved how you brought the Prince family history in without making it a lecture. The use of the decorations made it more poignant. Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have a new chapter up by the way. Glad you liked my family background with ornament emphasis.
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I loved how you brought the Prince family history in without making it a lecture. The use of the decorations made it more poignant. Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, nice background on the Princes.

    Author's Response: Thank you and I've posted more!
Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 3:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sweet and I loved hearing about the Prince Family. The Snape's are really fitting in nicely with their new granfather/great-grandfather, and little Harry sounds so adorable.

    Hmmmm...I think that Harry's middle name is Trouble!!

    Author's Response:

    Ha! I think you're right. It is! He's just full of Mischief.

    And they really are fitting in nicely with each other.

Title: Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree 18 Dec 2009 3:51 am
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked all the family background information. I also liked how Harry came to the rescue when his "Drandpa" was sad. So sweet. Happy Holiday to you and your family.

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! Same too you and I have a new updated for you!

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