The italicized conversation between Severus and Draco was beautiful. What a wonderful interlude in so many ways.
Ack, what well-meaning idiots. Poor Harry!
What a seesaw of emotion - fixing one problem only to be mired in another. This story has me hooked!
| Title: Distance, Timing, Breakdown, Fighting
| 02 Apr 2024 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Things really came to a head there. Severus really has a way of discovering what he wants to know! I like how proactive Harry was at the end and I’m hoping it makes a difference. Thanks for another terrific chapter!
| Title: A Pedagogical Disagreement
| 02 Apr 2024 11:48 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a really meaningful conversation between Harry and Snape. So many of the subtle dynamics of their growing relationship were dealt with so nicely. I only hope Harry can make as much progress with Draco soon.
Of course jealousy would arise. I hope Severus can address it head on. I’d love to see that play out. Poor Draco. He’s really having a rough go of it. Thanks for continuing to post more chapters!
And Harry just made things worse, sigh. I wish Ron and Hermione would be more supportive, but I can understand their perspective. I hope Harry talks to Severus and doesn’t just stew in his feelings.
Oh, a harsh dose of reality heading back to Hogwarts after the relative bubble they’ve been living in. And what an awful way to end their time together. I hope things look up soon. Thanks for another great chapter.
Yay, I love who came to the rescue! I wonder how that’s going to play out now with the changed dynamics. I also really like how Draco acted in the heat of the moment. All of the small interactions you detail really bring this story to life. It’s such a pleasure to read.
Poor Severus! He’s managing Harry so well, but it’s definitely running him ragged. I love how strict yet supportive and attuned he is.
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