This is really great!
I was awfully sad when Dan left, but at least he has Sandy now!
I'm sure this will be awesome so I can't wait for more! :)
| Title: Stranger
| 03 Oct 2008 5:20 am
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| Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous)
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You MUST update soon!
This story is brilliant and is just a lovey beyond brilliant idea
Does the Dan in your story repersent like Daniel Radcliffe?
Anyways
Much Love update soon!
| Title: Discoveries and a new friend
| 03 Oct 2008 5:13 am
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| Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous)
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this story is almost simliar to how Lord Voldemort became Lord Voldemort, gosh Harry's changing quick... :(
Wow. Very good so far, I'll be looking forward to your update. :D
If you haven't already decided you should do a bad (not so nice) Harry instead of an evil Harry. I've already read a bunch of fic's like that but I've never read one where Harry is bad but not evil like Voldemort.
Don't apologize for not describing Luc as other than 'stranger' or 'man' it makes sense that we don't have a different name to describe him, because Harry dosen't know who he is. But, who is he? I hope you update soon so we can understand the connection between the two of them. This is really a great story, the best of fanfics where Harry is still young. I can't wait to see what happens in the years before he goes to Hogwarts. How old is Harry, though? I remember reading that he was 5, but in another chapter (sorry, but I don't remember which one) he's described as being 6. Granted, Dan did send him a birthday present... Ok, so you update and I'll add this to my 'favorites' and read when you next post! (Contrary to what you have said previously about your writing-it is very good and it truly flows nicely; you don't have blatently obvious, if any at all, grammer or spelling mistakes. Just don't be too hard on yourself, this is a really great plot that you've got! Use it to your full advantage!)
Oooh! I love it! I need more. lol. It's fantastic. :D
| Title: Stranger
| 17 Jul 2007 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome story! Hope you can update soon!!!
I love it--I can't wait for more. I love how Harry is described. He's simply adorable, and I love his relationship with Dan. They're such cute freinds
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