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Reviews For My Secret Father
Title: My Secret Father 08 Aug 2022 8:55 pm
Reviewer: WillowMayStone (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely brilliant. One of the most amazing fanfics I ever read. Hope there is a sequel.
Title: Arcane 15 May 2022 12:57 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so grateful for the chapters you’ve posted, even as I hold hope that there will be more to read of this wonderful sequel at some point! It feels like Harry’s life with his father and brother is just starting.

    The story seems to be setting Harry up to interact with the elves in the forest around the Manor, and to eventually learn elven magic — which would be amazing! I hope that Severus finishes reading Harry’s journal soon, that they have a series of discussions about the contents of the journal, and that it brings the two closer together.

    Thanks so much for your absolutely brilliant stories. I enjoy them all more than I could possibly say.
Title: Arcane 15 May 2022 12:02 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    You’ve portrayed Harry’s awkwardness so nicely at feeling like “just Harry” in his ancestral home. I hope he feels less lonely and develops more confidence and sense of belonging as the summer progresses.
Title: Arcane 15 May 2022 11:51 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry finds a true home at Prince Manor. It sounds like a peaceful and lovely place. I imagine that Harry’s resentment at having lived in a cupboard, rather than in the Manor, may emerge at some point (even as he held it in upon seeing Prince Manor). I love the idea of the summer lessons.
Title: My Secret Father 15 May 2022 1:57 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful epilogue. The episode with Umbridge in her office was hilarious, by the way. I’m so glad that Harry is baring his soul to his father through the journal. Beautiful and touching. Thanks for the great read.
Title: My Secret Father 15 May 2022 1:50 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great way to end the story!
Title: My Secret Father 15 May 2022 1:35 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the Weasley twins. Fred’s sentiments at the end were spot on. Severus being there for Harry and soothing him was moving. I am so looking forward to the denouement ahead!
Title: My Secret Father 15 May 2022 1:30 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so relieved that Severus knows what happened now. He’ll know how to navigate this. I suspect that not all of Harry’s friends will react well when they find out.
Title: My Secret Father 15 May 2022 1:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I feel stunned. Never would I have imagined that happening in this story! Kudos for the seriously unexpected plot twist. Can Harry use the necklace to escape into the elven realm?
Title: My Secret Father 15 May 2022 1:12 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Harry learned about his elven heritage, however distant it may be. That seems like a significant plot line that I’m hoping to see more of, perhaps in the chapters ahead or in the sequel. The Christmas scene was wonderful.
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