Abrupt but good ending. Severus orders Harry better and Harry obeys.
Interesting explanation for the resurrections!! I only wish it could have been incorporated into the story, perhaps a few chapters from D or S's perspective, instead of dumped on the reader. I'm glad Harry is doing art therapy.
Well, she's not changed. No surprise there. I do with Harry would get well and begin to stand on his own. Whatever this weird spell is that makes him pass out can't be treated at all? Sad to see him like this.
Ouch. Well, any meeting with Petunia couldn't end will, could it?
You've raised the tension of the aftermath considerably! Terrific beginning!
I really liked this piece, as well. It made for a very satisfying follow up to the first tale. Bravo.
I really liked this tale. How Harry's trauma manifested itself was very interesting and true to his character - I love how he came to start dealing with it. He was long overdue for that, poor child. Snape and how he's taking to his second chance was also most gratifying. Well writ!
| Title: The aftermath of resurrection.
| 05 Jan 2017 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and of course the first in the series. I hope you will return to fan fiction sometime and in the meantime have a good break
| Title: The aftermath of resurrection.
| 03 Jan 2017 9:40 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Aww, yay. :) A happy ending. Fantastic. I'm so glad everything worked out the way it was meant to. Very uplifting. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story. :)
Nice ending. I'm glad that the tree have reconciled and, it sounds like they may become a family of sorts.
Thanks for all the wonderful stories you have shared with us. I hope you enjoy your literary break and will return renewed to continue your writing.
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